Writing Assignments for Classes of WRITING II, Academic Year 2015-2016

This post is designed for students who are taking Writing II course with me. The topic of this post is designed by following the course syllabus for WRITING II.

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  1. REVANI OKTAVIA NINGSIH
    2014/D
    14040112
    THE MEMORABLE EXPERIENCE

    Talking about experience, what is experience in your mind? What is the memorable experience that you have until now? Everyone has their own memorable experience, of course. They will always remember their beautiful experience. Now, I will tell you all of my amazing experience. How it can be amazing?

    I have been being a traditional dancerfor 5 years. It is so many experience that I get since I have been being a traditional dancer. I began my dance career since I in the high school. It is named SMKI (Sekolah Menengah Karawitan Indonesia) or now familiar with named SMKN 7 Padang. That is The Performing Art School. There is so many directions. My majors is dance, especially traditional dance. But in the special subject we learn National dance and International dance. International dance such as cha cha dance. It was my favorite moment when we are going to do dance examination. We can choose the best costume that we want to worn. Moreover, the music was fun and I just danced with heart and feeling. In that time I got good mark.

    Furthermore, the moment that I like very much is when I met The fift and sixth President of Indonesia Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono and Ms. Ani Yudhoyono. Every time I met them it was amazing moment. There is no all people in Indonesia can saw and met with them. And I was lucky to be art team who can saw The President for the third time in different moment, event and time.

    First of all, 2012 in VVIP Room BIM (Bandara International Minangkabau). I was being a carano, I have to give sirih in carano to the President and Ms. Ani Yudhoyono. Before we began Galombang dance, we are very exited and I said is it real? but, it is. Because that is the firts time I met directly. When the music was on and it is time to give sirih in carano to Mr.SBY and Ms.Ani. Mr. SBY said “how to eat eat this one by the way?” then I said, “ you can just ripping one piece,sir” . Mr. SBY took one strand of sirih and ate it. I think that is not delicious but he looks comforttable with sirih in his mouth. In other hand Ms. Ani Yudhoyono just took it out and not ate it.

    Secondly, 2013 October in kompleks Stasiun TVRI, Padang. SBY commemorate Hari Pangan Sedunia in Padang. There, we dance in front of The President and Team. We danced colossal dance to celebrate “hari pangan sedunia” and we joined with SMAN 3 Padang and ISI Padang Panjang. We danced powerful and enthusiasm. Because that is big event and there is full of National and International guest. So that we have to do our best and dont forget to always smile. It was fun cause at the end some dancer treaded pieces of plate glass. All of guest amazed at the moment.

    Thirdly, 2015 October in grand Inna Muara Hotel. There, The President and team celebrate Sumpah pemuda Day. For the third time I danced in front of SBY but now He is not Indonesian President. Even though he is not our president but he is still charismatic.

    All in all, that is all of my amazing experience. I got beautifull experience that not all people can get. Big thanks to Allah who give me beautiful chance.

  2. Name : Liza Hartina
    Npm : 14040107
    Session : D
    Essay title: The demage from smoke Riau

      Out of the forest in Riau in do by people who are not responsible. Out of the forest done to open land. The burning of the forest it resulted in the smoke that made the community Riau complained. Even the smoke was spread to other areas like west Sumatra.

      As a result of the smoke thick annoys breathing, so residents of Riau and surrounding areas should use a mask if you want to get out of the house and run its activities. For some people who have to use the mask troubled because of unfamiliar, but if they did not wear their masks will be a breath of fresh air. Air is mixed with the smoke is not good for health.

      Even due to the smoke of burning forest that some lives have been floated. Like little kids and babies reportedly died of servere RESPIRATORY disease. Very unfortunate result of human behavior once the bad impact on many people and very detrimental to all. The goverment and the president is very slow in responding to the case, so that the very citizens complain.

      In the area of Riau and surronding suurounded by smoke, the proscess of teaching and leraning on holiday right by the government. Because if children should be out home to go to school then would not good for health. In response to this, the smoke we should pay attention to the environment and health. Like many consume drinking water, condensased milk, and many cunsume vitamin C.

      In conclusion, the smoke that spread in other areas in Riau and the result right by human hands are not responsible by burning forest. Resulted in some people died of RESPIRATORY and pain. Being right is very slow in responding to the government’s case, and a lot of people who complained. We must pay attention to the health and environment to maintain health.

  3. name : dian wina putri
    npm : 14040132 / D
    essay title : the danger of smoke

    Nowadays , we are affected by the smoke that occurs in almost all of the island of Sumatra. Smog is already a well-planned event or a disaster in every year. Smog occurs caused by human hands irresponsible. Who is to blame in this event? Should we be angry with the government were negligent in addressing this problem? We as ordinary citizens can only wait for help from the government. The government should be responsive in solving this problem because many victims in the event of smog such as children in the area riau been affected much ispa disease until someone dies. As a resident of intelligent we must address this issue wisely. Do not underestimate this problem, because of the smoke that occurs could endanger the health of our bodies. As for how we can do in the face of this problem is
      First by wearing a mask out of the house. That health is an asset that must be maintained, for it to avoid diseases that are outside of our homes have to wear a mask in activities outside the home, smoke might make us diseased ispa, air-water eyes, headaches and other ailments
      Secondly, with attention to the food we eat. When the weather is so bad that we have to pay attention to the intake of the nutrients we consume, with emphasis on foods containing vitamin C such as citrus fruits, pineapple and other fruits that contain lots of vitamin c
      Third, consume lots of water and sweetened condensed milk. White water serves refreshing the body, making the body more vitamin and fit. Sweetened condensed milk is useful to neutralize toxins in our body.
      In conclusions, can we do when a disaster of this smoke is by paying attention to the health of themselves and the surrounding environment. We must take care that our activities are not disrupted by the disaster that occurred in our country. Who to blame? People who burn the forest or the government that is not responsive in solving this problem? Of course we can do just to ask for help to the almighty to drop any rain so that the smog which this occurs can be lost.

  4. The Romanttic Movie Pinocchio Syndrome
    Pinocchio Syndrome is an Korean movie. The movie tell about a orphan story who vengeance to reporter. Following is the shorten story about Pinocchio Syndrome.
    As a child, Ha-Myeong grew up in a family with his firefighter father, mother and older brother. Ha-Myeong and his older brother both possess higher than normal intellect and proud of their father. A fire at a waste facility though destroys his family. His mother dies a short time later and Ha-Myeong ends up being scooped out of the ocean by an unknown man.
    The man that pulls Ha-Myeong out of the ocean is the grandfather of In-Ha. In-Ha’s grandfather believes Ha-Myeong is his eldest son Dal-Po, who died 40 years ago. Ha-Myeong is then adopted by In-Ha’s grandfather and his name is changed to Dal-Po. In-Ha and Dal-Po now live together as uncle and niece, although they are in the same age range. In-Ha has a Pinocchio Syndrome. Whenever she lies she gets the hiccups. In-Ha and Dal-Po get along well until Dal-Po learns that In-Ha’s mother is the reporter that covered the waste facility fire that destroyed his family. Dal-Po tries to distance himself from In-Ha, but he also develops feelings for her.
    Years later, Dal-Po and In-Ha’s family are now living in Seoul. In-Ha attempts to become a reporter like her mother. In-Ha meets her mother for the first time in years at a job interview for MSC Broadcasting Station. Her mother is the person giving her the job interview. In-Ha though fails the job interview. Her mother rejects her because of her Pinocchio Syndrome.
    Dal-Po is now driving a taxi to support their family. One day, Dal-Po meets In-Ha’s mother and decides to become a reporter. Dal-Po inviting In-Ha become a reporter together. They are sign up in the YGN Broadcasting Station that be competitor MSC Broadcasting Station. In conclusion, they undergo job as a reporter without any grudges with the In-Ha’s mother.

  5. Romantic movie Pinocchio Syndrome
    Pinocchio Syndrome is an Korean movie. The movie tell about a orphan story who vengeance to reporter. Following is the shorten story about Pinocchio Syndrome.
    As a child, Ha-Myeong grew up in a family with his firefighter father, mother and older brother. Ha-Myeong and his older brother both possess higher than normal intellect and proud of their father. A fire at a waste facility though destroys his family. His mother dies a short time later and Ha-Myeong ends up being scooped out of the ocean by an unknown man.
    The man that pulls Ha-Myeong out of the ocean is the grandfather of In-Ha. In-Ha’s grandfather believes Ha-Myeong is his eldest son Dal-Po, who died 40 years ago. Ha-Myeong is then adopted by In-Ha’s grandfather and his name is changed to Dal-Po. In-Ha and Dal-Po now live together as uncle and niece, although they are in the same age range. In-Ha has a Pinocchio Syndrome. Whenever she lies she gets the hiccups. In-Ha and Dal-Po get along well until Dal-Po learns that In-Ha’s mother is the reporter that covered the waste facility fire that destroyed his family. Dal-Po tries to distance himself from In-Ha, but he also develops feelings for her.
    Years later, Dal-Po and In-Ha’s family are now living in Seoul. In-Ha attempts to become a reporter like her mother. In-Ha meets her mother for the first time in years at a job interview for MSC Broadcasting Station. Her mother is the person giving her the job interview. In-Ha though fails the job interview. Her mother rejects her because of her Pinocchio Syndrome.
    Dal-Po is now driving a taxi to support their family. One day, Dal-Po meets In-Ha’s mother and decides to become a reporter. Dal-Po inviting In-Ha become a reporter together. They are sign up in the YGN Broadcasting Station that be competitor MSC Broadcasting Station. In conclusion, they undergo job as a reporter without any grudges with the In-Ha’s mother.

  6. Name: Salbiah
    Npm:14040082. C

    Hello stranger is one of Thai movie that very amusing. I am very like this movie. This movie made me laughed when i watched that. I have some reason why i like this movie are, genre of movie, actor and actress, and take place of movie.

    First, genre of movie. Genre of this movie was comedy and romance. This genre really made me amuse to wacth that. When i watched this movie i laughed because acting from actor and actress it was really funny, especially part when they bet. The actor ate octopus that still life and the actress drunk a bottle of Soju. She never drink it. As the result, lips of the actor was puffy and the actress intoxicated. Another part of this movie that also funny was when the actor spoke english to the seller of food. He spoke english not clear until the seller missunderstand.The saller wrong gave food. She served frog to him, meanwhile his order was beef. Because he thought that was served was beef he ate that. But, when he ate that the taste it was diffrent not like taste of beef. He asked to the seller” is this beef? By showing picture of cow in the megazine. Then the seller replied’’no’’. She showed that meat that he ate was frog by showing head of pig. When he knew about it he direct vomit because he did not like to frog. The seller was amazed saw him. Missunderstood both of them was really funny. Part of this movie that described romance was when the actor admired his love to the actress when was snow. This was really romantic.

    Second, actor and actress. Actor of this movie was Chunthawit Thanasewi ( ฉันทวิชช์ ธนะเสวี) as Dang and the actress was Nuengthida Sophon (หนึ่งธิดา โสภณ) as May. This actor and actress were handsome and beutiful. They were also artist of thai that very famous. Besides, their acting in this movie was good. They could acting perpectly on part comedy and romance. I think they are pairs that matching in this movie. They made this movie like real.

    Last, take place. Take place of this movie was in South Korea. The places were beauty, interest, and famous in Korea susc as, Namsan Tower, Cafe Prince, and Nami Island ,that also one of take place Korean drama that very famous. Those places described beauty nature of South Korea. Because i like South Korea, take place of this movie very compatible with the genre.

    In summary, I am really like this movie from the genre that made me amuse to watch that, actor and actress that could acting perfectly, and take place that described nature beauty of South Korea. This movie really pleasant to watch. I think Hello Stranger is one of the best movie of Thai that ever i watched.

  7. NAME:MUHAMMAD RAFIKI
    NPM:12040106
    TITTLE:Di bawah lindungan ka’bah

    The story about two peoples they have falling in love, Different background live. This movies has purposing to audiences that if we like someone, we must to far and always stronger to get it. In this movies I want to write about Ahmid’s love to zainab zainab have angku as didi petet for the first fight story until Ahmid getting zainab heart.
    For the first fight story Ahmid to getting zainab’s heart Ahmid family working in the zainab house Ahmid was looking zainab is very pretty lady can make Ahmid falling in love but Ahmid know that he is do not matching with Zainab family because Ahmid from the poor family.
    The next time Ahmid schooled by zainab father or angku as didi petet. Angku do not know what the Zainab and Ahmid feel after that angku has other think about the love zainab he is after choose religious man for the zainab husband while Ahmid knowing what the Angku plan, but he does not give up about the Angku’s statement.
    After that Ahmid and Zainab going to see debate moment to find the winner in the street they will go to home and than Zainab swoon, Ahmid see the tragedy and help, but the kiay see too. Making the kiay statement Ahmid wrong to do it, Ahmid evicted from the hometown.
    For the next time Ahmid work In the train area he is leaving her mother. Along with time Ahmid send the letter for Zainab that Ahmid in Mecca. After the read the letter Zainab dead in hometown and than Ahmid dead in Mecca.
    So, in this movies have moral message for the audience that if we want someone or something we must fight to get it

  8. Name : Artika Rahmah
    NPM : 14040104 / 2014 C

    The moon the embraces the sun

    The moon the Embraces the Sun is a film that tells the story in a kingdom in korea. The theme of this film isromance. The story is very touching and drain tears. Interspersed with various conflicts and political cunning in the kingdom, which was finally won, too. And the guilty eventually suffered a bitter defeat. First, I discuss about the characters. As for the characters, namely:
    1. Kim Soo-hyun as Crown Prince / King Lee Hwon
    2. Yeo Jin Goo as Hwon
    3. Han Ga-in as Heo Yeon-woo / shaman Wool
    4. Kim Yoo Jung as Yeon Woo (crown princess)
    5. Jung Il Woo as Prince Yang Myung
    6. Lee Min Ho as young Yang Myung
    7. Kim Min Seo Yoon Bo Kyung
    8. Kim So Hyun as young Bo Kyung

    Plot in this movie is the plot forward. Background is located in the palace. The synopsis of this story is Heo Yeon Woo, who was thirteen years old was elected Crown Princess Joseon, but the Queen Mother and the prime minister did not accept the results of this crown princess, and they planned the murder of the crown by sending a curse to him. With the help of magic shaman head of a very powerful star palace, the crown princess suffering from an unknown illness. But who would have thought, she too who rescue the princess crown back and take care of him for 8 years. But due to the influence of curses and potions were drunk to him, the crown princess lost all his memory. But fate willed another, after being apart for 8 years, the crown prince and crown princess finally reunited and eventually become king and queen of Joseon.

    The leessons to be drawn from this film is that you should never do evil to others, especially since she was never mean to us. rottenness hidden, in time they will smell as well. Which covered such crimes was in the end will be revealed as well.

  9. Name : Elia Roza Fransiska
    NPM : 14040175 / 2014 C
    Movie : Mother because of You (Kuala Lumpur Malaysia,November 2002)
    Genre : Drama

    Mother because of You

    This movie tells a story of a boy left behind by her mother since she was a baby with his grandmother in the Kuala Lumpur Malaysia. Alif is the name of the boy child who left his mother with his grandmother, Alif is a figure of a child who has tremendous patience heart, and always love grandmother .although Alif grandmother can not see and they just live together in house lit only by a small bamboo by fire for a torch at night. In this movie a lof of positive things that we must make our examples and life experiences . Alif a perfection that does not have to live with a grandmother who has blindness in his eyes ,but they still live a happy life despite Alif never feel happiness given his mother. Grandmother very loving Alif , Alif is happiness for him and be a friend who is always there when grandmother feel pain because circumstances were not perfect. Alif always helped her grandmother searching for firewood and sell cakes made from cassava .

    Next in this movie too many moral values and religious values that we can learn, on the them despite physical shortcomings Alif has never been shy to help the blind grandmother. Each alif go to school, Alif always insulted by the friends around him, will remain Alif not want to repay evil theme friend. Alif always felt he was perfect because always cherished by a grandmother who was always there in the near Alif. This small men want to hug and met his mother.

    The last Alif went to look for her mother to town ,arriving in the city looking for the address of his mother Alif finally meet his mother but her mother did not like to become familiar with Alif. Finally decided to get away from mother by leaving a small note that read“ Alif very miss mother may always remember Alif and meet with grandmother“. Alif runs withstand sat that she missed because the mother was no loNger what he expects. Not much later letter written Alif read by his mother with tears describing his mother looking for Alif , finally fouNd the fireless mother because the run was hit and his body was covered with blood. Mother Alif hugged and cried for the life of regret because had left Alif.

    Over all mother regret what has left alif vain ,and see Alif stiff lifeless. Of the movie we can see the outline of patience small child abandoned by his mother along the old grandmother who was blind and living at the mercy of others and always scorned by his friends , but the figure Alif will become a role model where this figure we must make an example to be more appreciate life despite the many shortcomings that we get.

  10. Name : Nefri Nandi
    NPM : 14040092 / 2014 C
    Movie : GHOST ISLAND PART 3
    Genre : Horror

    GHOST ISLAND PART 3

    Three ghost island is the film or play director by Jhose Poernamo which a constitute director in three ghost island, writer from the movies three ghost island is Beny Akhmad Basuni. The actor and artist player in film three ghost island is a famous artists: Shinta Bachir, Abdurahman Arif, Boy Hamzah, Ricky Ardi Putra, Jenny Cortez. The three ghost island to tell about mysterious manner and the case not be expressed by public. Madura Island is object for make a movie three ghost island, because the place have dibble situation it is make the place is perfect for make a movie three ghost island. The contain movie to tell about: friendship among Nero and friends, movie tell about adventure and solidarity between actor, the ghost movie in Indonesian always contain immoral action, immoral action like as price sale.

    Friendship among Nero and friends, in this story in movie Nero and friends go to island because fill break time with her friends because charge past time with her friends, Nero have some lodging for the night in Madura Island. But after the some day many awkward event during the friend of Nuro stay in the house. Zora every night always listen strange voice appear in the back house. After that, Zarra begin feel be afraid after listen the voice, and the next day, Monca swim in the sea and Monca sow one people always look at to Monca and Monca quick run until to her friends but the Monca leg bruise because Monca treading small wood, and the next, Monca will be kill by mysterious people and the make Monca will be dead. And than, one by one of friend from Nuro will experience tragic dead. I think the plot of movie it is simple but make spectator not boring with the plot, the plot is interesting from me.

    Movie tell about adventure and solidarity between actor, in this story when I see from the started movie until the end of movie the character between actors in movies like as real situation, the actor have a role with as well, add the supported character, body language, take the action make the movies it is can be spectacular story. The ghost actor use perfect make up and the make complete movie. In every session the spectator made on feel shock when the ghost suddenly appear. It is make the movie pleasure for ghost movies lover specially in Indonesia.

    The ghost movie in Indonesian always contain immoral action, I am disappointed about ghost movies in Indonesia because the ghost movie in Indonesia always bring immoral element, I don’t know should it be ghost movie immoral present it is bad present for children under 18 years old. I feel the ghost movie not bring immoral present during the plot of movie is interesting will make the spectator for a watch a ghost movies.

    The immoral action like as price sale, I think the immoral present is a price for sale ghost movie when the actor movie not contain immoral scene, the movie not watching with the people in Indonesia,if the ghost movie not immoral contain can be the ghost movie watching with the all age.
    And than, anywhere about ghost movie specially ghost movie always give moral value although it is a ghost movie can give moral value contain for make building a character, and good actitude, although it is ghost movie not always identical with immoral movies.

  11. Name : Irvan Haiko Rasaki
    NPM : 14040080 / 2014 C
    Movie : Final Destination (Season 1-5)
    Genre : Horror

    FINAL DESTINATION (Season 1-5)

    Talks about the movie in the entertainment productiton, the Horror Movie stands on the first list on the billboard of movie. In encyclopedia Horor movie is a film genre seeking to elicit a negative emotional reaction from viewers by playing on the audience’s primal fears. But, in my opinion Horror movie is the one of genre’s movie which tells about the ghostly, mysteriously, and frightened story that makes the audience or viewers to be embittered. Most of people said the Horror Movie is the scary movie in the some of theme of movies. In here, i took an example for Horror Movie to critics and the theme of the movie is Final Destination. Final Destination is an American horror franchise which the number of “180” is the dangerous accursed number for all of the victims who safe from their death fate and it comprises 5 films, there are: Final Destination (2000), Final Destination 2 (2003), Final Destination 3 (2006), The Final Destination (2009), and Final Destination 5 (2011) distributed by New Line Cinema. Final Destination tells about the victims of the terrible accident that that will kill numerous victims but they could deceive the death, the instict of the one of the victims or premonition of the accident could safe their lives, however it just for a while for live and then the death comes back for them. There are the critics for this movie.

    First, the movie was very interesting for watched but some of the scenes of this movie show the infamy for death, and sometimes the victims who can deceive the death or survive, they will also death in grisly condition that you can not imagine. But, in here i can not understand with the Alex Brown (Final Destination 1), Kimberly and Thomas Burke’s (Final Destination 2) death did not be shown in the movie or kill on the screen. And their death just be shown in the next movie in the news on the newspaper. I just wonder how do they death in the movie? It is not fair whether all of the victims be shown their death in the movie. In the next movie Alex brown death cause of death hit in the head by falling brick in the civil data of accident, and then Kimberly and Thomas Burke death by the wood chipper accident and the news show on the newspaper railway station. That are the victims who was not be shown their death on screen.

    Second, the violence of Final Destination is very despicable although the violence not has the doer or the antagonism in the story. However the victims also compete for still alive and survive, sometimes the victims mutual to kill each other such as what Peter Friedkin who wants to kill Molly Harper, he thinks if he kills her, he will get a peace of live without the frighten feel for death again. And at that time Sam Lawton kills Peter in through back with meat spit for safe Molly’s life (Final Destination 5). Another violences show in the how the victims death one by one and there are much blood and terrific death that you never see it, and you will see how they survive in the bad situation. In this part, actually children be banned for watch this movie cause this movie has much violence such blood in anywhere which children must not watch it. It will make the children be coward for do anything and over careful for do anything.

    Third, this movie sometimes show the death scene with unlogical scene that makes you not understand about this movie. is this the supranatural movie or not? You will think about it. Some of scenes of Final Destination movie are unlogical things for death scene, for first example from Todd Waggner (Final Destination 1) who died strangled in the bathtub by retractable clothes line. Before he slipped down to the bathtub the slippery water flow to his feet, and he slipped down to bathtub and the clothes line was entwined his neck until he died, after that the slippery water was turn back to the where it comes, it such as a supernatural accident that you can not understand like i can not understand with that accident. And second, Carter Horton (Final Destination) in his surviving death in railways, in this scene the death almost took his life. He expressly stopped on the railways line cause he got an angrily think with his lover death he was depressed, and all of his friend which on the car there are Alex, Clear, and Billy directly to got out from the car, but when Carter wanted to turn on the car it did not on and he tried to get out the car’s door was locked with itself and nobody locked it, then Alex back to the car for safe Carter. After he safe Carter the train crushed the car. Carter’s life was safe. After that the piece of the car swing into Billy and cut a half head of Billy’s head and Billy got his death. Is the Carter accident a supranatural or that is really accident?. Third, Ian McKinley (Final Destination 3) who death crushed in half by falling malfunction Cherry-picker which falling caused a fireworks. I think it was unlogical accident that could falling down with the fireworks. Forth, Hunt Wynorski (The Final destination) who death caused his organs sucked out by pool drain crushed by overflowing, in this scene he was swimming in the pool but his lucky coin fell to the pool and when he wanted to take it back he was sucked down to the pipeline hole in the base of pool, and made his organs be scattered around at the pool area. But, how it could sucked the human body? Could you explain it? It is unlogical scene for me.

    Fourth, the plot from each season of Final Destination is very wonderful preparation neat although this movie is the failed movie from “X-Files”. I think the Final Destination’s movie has a different story from all of the horror story, cause in here the story prepared the plot with the connection plot from Final Destination 1 until 5. And i almost tricked with the plot of this movie, i thought the first accident that made the Final Destination be Started was from Final Destination 1. But, after i watched all of the Final Destination’s season, i know that the first accident or tragedy when the Final Destination began was from Final Destination 5, which Sam Lawton (Final Destination 5) is the first person who has an instict about the future whether he and his colleague will be death in the bridge collapse accident. After you watched the Final Destination 5 until the end of story you will know that the Alex Brown (Final Destination 1) and his friends death after the Flight 180’s accident. And that is very amazing plot that you should to know.

    In Conclusion, the Final Destination Movie is a horror movie which tells about the dangerous accursed number “180” for all of the victims who safe from their death fate. And not all of the movies have a good scene and good delivery for all of people, in here writer wanted to remind to the parents for attention their children for watching a movie. Actually, this movie just for up to 18 years old who has been mature for watch this movie. And then, for all of season have a connection from each season in this movie, from season 1 until 5 that prepared with a neat plot. However the New Line Cinema want to make the next season, the plot of the story will be connect with preview season.

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  12. GHOST ISLAND PART 3

    Three ghost island is the film or play director by Jhose Poernamo which a constitute director in three ghost island, writer from the movies three ghost island is Beny Akhmad Basuni. The actor and artist player in film three ghost island is a famous artists: Shinta Bachir, Abdurahman Arif, Boy Hamzah, Ricky Ardi Putra, Jenny Cortez. The three ghost island to tell about mysterious manner and the case not be expressed by public. Madura Island is object for make a movie three ghost island, because the place have dibble situation it is make the place is perfect for make a movie three ghost island. The contain movie to tell about: friendship among Nero and friends, movie tell about adventure and solidarity between actor, the ghost movie in Indonesian always contain immoral action, immoral action like as price sale.

    Friendship among Nero and friends, in this story in movie Nero and friends go to island because fill break time with her friends because charge past time with her friends, Nero have some lodging for the night in Madura Island. But after the some day many awkward event during the friend of Nuro stay in the house. Zora every night always listen strange voice appear in the back house. After that, Zarra begin feel be afraid after listen the voice, and the next day, Monca swim in the sea and Monca sow one people always look at to Monca and Monca quick run until to her friends but the Monca leg bruise because Monca treading small wood, and the next, Monca will be kill by mysterious people and the make Monca will be dead. And than, one by one of friend from Nuro will experience tragic dead. I think the plot of movie it is simple but make spectator not boring with the plot, the plot is interesting from me.

    Movie tell about adventure and solidarity between actor, in this story when I see from the started movie until the end of movie the character between actors in movies like as real situation, the actor have a role with as well, add the supported character, body language, take the action make the movies it is can be spectacular story. The ghost actor use perfect make up and the make complete movie. In every session the spectator made on feel shock when the ghost suddenly appear. It is make the movie pleasure for ghost movies lover specially in Indonesia.

    The ghost movie in Indonesian always contain immoral action, I am disappointed about ghost movies in Indonesia because the ghost movie in Indonesia always bring immoral element, I don’t know should it be ghost movie immoral present it is bad present for children under 18 years old. I feel the ghost movie not bring immoral present during the plot of movie is interesting will make the spectator for a watch a ghost movies.

    The immoral action like as price sale, I think the immoral present is a price for sale ghost movie when the actor movie not contain immoral scene, the movie not watching with the people in Indonesia,if the ghost movie not immoral contain can be the ghost movie watching with the all age.
    And than, anywhere about ghost movie specially ghost movie always give moral value although it is a ghost movie can give moral value contain for make building a character, and good actitude, although it is ghost movie not always identical with immoral movies.

  13. Final Destination
    (Season 1-5)
    By : Irvan Haiko Rasaki

    Talks about the movie in the entertainment production, the Horror Movie stands on the first list on the billboard of movie. In encyclopedia Horror movie is a film genre seeking to elicit a negative emotional reaction from viewers by playing on the audience’s primal fears. But, in my opinion Horror movie is the one of genre’s movie which tells about the ghostly, mysteriously, and frightened story that makes the audience or viewers to be embittered. Most of people said the Horror Movie is the scary movie in the some of theme of movies. In here, i took an example for Horror Movie to critics and the theme of the movie is Final Destination. Final Destination is an American horror franchise which the number of “180” is the dangerous accursed number for all of the victims who safe from their death fate and it comprises 5 films, there are: Final Destination (2000), Final Destination 2 (2003), Final Destination 3 (2006), The Final Destination (2009), and Final Destination 5 (2011) distributed by New Line Cinema. Final Destination tells about the victims of the terrible accident that that will kill numerous victims but they could deceive the death, the instict of the one of the victims or premonition of the accident could safe their lives, however it just for a while for live and then the death comes back for them. There are the critics for this movie.

    First, the movie was very interesting for watched but some of the scenes of this movie show the infamy for death, and sometimes the victims who can deceive the death or survive, they will also death in grisly condition that you can not imagine. But, in here i can not understand with the Alex Brown (Final Destination 1), Kimberly and Thomas Burke’s (Final Destination 2) death did not be shown in the movie or kill on the screen. And their death just be shown in the next movie in the news on the newspaper. I just wonder how do they death in the movie? It is not fair whether all of the victims be shown their death in the movie. In the next movie Alex brown death cause of death hit in the head by falling brick in the civil data of accident, and then Kimberly and Thomas Burke death by the wood chipper accident and the news show on the newspaper railway station. That are the victims who was not be shown their death on screen.

    Second, the violence of Final Destination is very despicable although the violence not has the doer or the antagonism in the story. However the victims also compete for still alive and survive, sometimes the victims mutual to kill each other such as what Peter Friedkin who wants to kill Molly Harper, he thinks if he kills her, he will get a peace of live without the frighten feel for death again. And at that time Sam Lawton kills Peter in through back with meat spit for safe Molly’s life (Final Destination 5). Another violence show in the how the victims death one by one and there are much blood and terrific death that you never see it, and you will see how they survive in the bad situation. In this part, actually children be banned for watch this movie cause this movie has much violence such blood in anywhere which children must not watch it. It will make the children be coward for do anything and over careful for do anything.

    Third, this movie sometimes show the death scene with unlogical scene that makes you not understand about this movie. is this the supranatural movie or not? You will think about it. Some of scenes of Final Destination movie are unlogical things for death scene, for first example from Todd Waggner (Final Destination 1) who died strangled in the bathtub by retractable clothes line. Before he slipped down to the bathtub the slippery water flow to his feet, and he slipped down to bathtub and the clothes line was entwined his neck until he died, after that the slippery water was turn back to the where it comes, it such as a supernatural accident that you can not understand like i can not understand with that accident. And second, Carter Horton (Final Destination) in his surviving death in railways, in this scene the death almost took his life. He expressly stopped on the railways line cause he got an angrily think with his lover death he was depressed, and all of his friend which on the car there are Alex, Clear, and Billy directly to got out from the car, but when Carter wanted to turn on the car it did not on and he tried to get out the car’s door was locked with itself and nobody locked it, then Alex back to the car for safe Carter. After he safe Carter the train crushed the car. Carter’s life was safe. After that the piece of the car swing into Billy and cut a half head of Billy’s head and Billy got his death. Is the Carter accident a supranatural or that is really accident?. Third, Ian McKinley (Final Destination 3) who death crushed in half by falling malfunction Cherry-picker which falling caused a fireworks. I think it was unlogical accident that could falling down with the fireworks. Forth, Hunt Wynorski (The Final destination) who death caused his organs sucked out by pool drain crushed by overflowing, in this scene he was swimming in the pool but his lucky coin fell to the pool and when he wanted to take it back he was sucked down to the pipeline hole in the base of pool, and made his organs be scattered around at the pool area. But, how it could sucked the human body? Could you explain it? It is unlogical scene for me.

    Fourth, the plot from each season of Final Destination is very wonderful preparation neat although this movie is the failed movie from “X-Files”. I think the Final Destination’s movie has a different story from all of the horror story, cause in here the story prepared the plot with the connection plot from Final Destination 1 until 5. And i almost tricked with the plot of this movie, i thought the first accident that made the Final Destination be Started was from Final Destination 1. But, after i watched all of the Final Destination’s season, i know that the first accident or tragedy when the Final Destination began was from Final Destination 5, which Sam Lawton (Final Destination 5) is the first person who has an instict about the future whether he and his colleague will be death in the bridge collapse accident. After you watched the Final Destination 5 until the end of story you will know that the Alex Brown (Final Destination 1) and his friends death after the Flight 180’s accident. And that is very amazing plot that you should to know.

    In Conclusion, the Final Destination Movie is a horror genre which tells about the dangerous accursed number “180” for all of the victims who safe from the death fate, and try to find a way how to alive. And not all of the movies have a good scene and good delivery for all of people, in here writer wanted to remind to the parents for attention their children for watching a movie. Actually, this movie just for up to 18 years old who has been mature for watch this movie. And then, for all of season have a connection from each season in this movie, from season 1 until 5 that prepared with a neat plot. However the New Line Cinema want to make the next season, the plot of the story will be connect with preview season.

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  14. Name : Liza Marzawati
    Npm : 14040095
    Title : DORAEMON STAND BY ME

    In my opinion, the movie doraemon Stand by me the story is very nice and touching.
    first, Doraemon movie stand by me tells about friendship doraemon and nobita. Nobita they are very familiar since childhood. Friendship they make me be inspired and learn about the meaning of friendship.

    Second, doraemon movie stand by me have a romantic story that is about the romance nobita and shizuka. Nobita is a good kid and fun, although he was always opposed by her friend he was always patient and the one thing that do strange and funny behavior.

    Third, other than in terms of story, the one thing that impressed me the doraemon movie Stand by me that the graphic quality 3D animation that makes me feel real all of the images that appear in the movie.

    In conclusion, doraemon movie stand by me is great because it tells the story or friendship, romance, and adventure they were very impressive. I really like the doraemon stand by me movie.

  15. NAME: MUHAMMAD RAFIKI
    NPM: 12040106
    TITLE: Di bawah lindungan ka’bah

    The story about two peoples they have falling in love, Different background live. This movies has purposing to audiences that if we like someone, we must to far and always stronger to get it. In this movies I want to write about Ahmid’s love to zainab zainab have angku as didi petet for the first fight story until Ahmid getting zainab heart.

    For the first fight story Ahmid to getting zainab’s heart Ahmid family working in the zainab house Ahmid was looking zainab is very pretty lady can make Ahmid falling in love but Ahmid know that he is do not matching with Zainab family because Ahmid from the poor family.

    The next time Ahmid schooled by zainab father or angku as didi petet. Angku do not know what the Zainab and Ahmid feel after that angku has other think about the love zainab he is after choose religious man for the zainab husband while Ahmid knowing what the Angku plan, but he does not give up about the Angku’s statement.

    After that Ahmid and Zainab going to see debate moment to find the winner in the street they will go to home and than Zainab swoon, Ahmid see the tragedy and help, but the kiay see too. Making the kiay statement Ahmid wrong to do it, Ahmid evicted from the hometown.
    For the next time Ahmid work In the train area he is leaving her mother. Along with time Ahmid send the letter for Zainab that Ahmid in Mecca. After the read the letter Zainab dead in hometown and than Ahmid dead in Mecca

    So, in this movies have moral message for the audience that if we want someone or something we must fight to get it

  16. Di bawah lindungan ka’bah

    The story about two peoples they have falling in love, Different background live. This movies has purposing to audiences that if we like someone, we must to far and always stronger to get it. In this movies I want to write about Ahmid’s love to zainab zainab have angku as didi petet for the first fight story until Ahmid getting zainab heart.

    For the first fight story Ahmid to getting zainab’s heart Ahmid family working in the zainab house Ahmid was looking zainab is very pretty lady can make Ahmid falling in love but Ahmid know that he is do not matching with Zainab family because Ahmid from the poor family.

    The next time Ahmid schooled by zainab father or angku as didi petet. Angku do not know what the Zainab and Ahmid feel after that angku has other think about the love zainab he is after choose religious man for the zainab husband while Ahmid knowing what the Angku plan, but he does not give up about the Angku’s statement.

    After that Ahmid and Zainab going to see debate moment to find the winner in the street they will go to home and than Zainab swoon, Ahmid see the tragedy and help, but the kiay see too. Making the kiay statement Ahmid wrong to do it, Ahmid evicted from the hometown.
    For the next time Ahmid work In the train area he is leaving her mother. Along with time Ahmid send the letter for Zainab that Ahmid in Mecca. After the read the letter Zainab dead in hometown and than Ahmid dead in Mecca.

    So, in this movies have moral message for the audience that if we want someone or something we must fight to get it

  17. Name : Daramaya Asria
    NIM : 14040133
    Essay Title : The Best of Relationship Between A Dog And A Boy

    Mr.Peabody and Sherman is animation movie which tell about a high technology that has made by Mr.Peabody. It is WABAC machine. That machine can bring us to future time or past time, with the other word, we can visit places that we want. In this section, I will try to do movie review and give my opinion for this movie.

    First of all, I will tell about characterisitic from the prominent actors and actrees from this movie. The first, Mr.Peabody (Ty Burrel) is a dog that has a different skil from others dog. Since he is child, nobody person who wants adopt him because he never wants to do a thing that had been governed by his boss. For example, when he was adopted, he was governed to take again a bone that had been throw, but he did not want, in his mind, that is just a waste of activity. Therefore, he decides to study scients and success get various kind of appreciations from all his invention and one of it is WABAC machine. Next, Sherman who was played by max chaeles. He is a smart boy and a son from Mr.Peabody. At school, he always knows everythings in history lesson because he had visited all place in this world with Mr.Peabody using WABAC machines. He had gone to past time to study a history in that period. For example, he ever went to period The France Revolution where the queen that period likes cake untill his citizen become poor. And at school, Sherman can tell that history clearly until make people not trust him. Then, the next character is Penny Peterson. Penny Peterson (Ariel Winter) is a Sherman’s girl friend all at one tobe a sherman’s enemy. But in end ths story, they become a best friend. Penny Peterson makes Sherman in big problem when she was invited Mr.Peabody to their home. Sherman had told about WABAC and make Penny Peterson want to know about it. She always forces Sherman to bring her to WABAC and try it. In this section is a climaks from this film. Every problem in past time had happened.

    Secondly, I will give my opnion about this film. Then, I had been read an article about a animation movie. In that article, I get the important point. It said that in order to a animation movie can become a memories that is not easy to be forgotten actually, it has to showing clearly in high level of element, story, and visual. From it, my opinion, Mr.peabody and Sherman can show story and havs a good visual. It was proved in the good layout of plot in section by section. It has been showing 3D quality of pictures and also the plot is good managed. This film is good for children because make lessons in its story. Children can see how Sherman and Mr.Peabody do their advanture and journey in past time. There are history of elements in this movie. Children can know hostory in past time. Eventhough it is looking disorder because a problem that had make a past time is disorder, this movie can make us to easy get the important point. Example, thre is a dog that want to adopt a boy and he always try to make boy happy and also always keep him.

    Thirdly, there are a value moral in this film. Like a example from above text in last paragraph, we can see how a father keep his boy carefully where Mr.Peabody makes a genius pen for Sherman to call him if Sherman has a problem in his school. A father who want his boy become smart child also do by Mr.Peabody. He makes WABAC machine for Sherman in order to be Sherman can study from past time. He introduces all of it for Sherman. And also, this movie tells about realtioan beetween a dog and human. It can be looked from Mr.Peabody had adopted Sherman as his son.

    All in all, we can know this film from side characters of actros or actrees, plot of this story, and there are some moral value in this movie. And than we can give a summary that this movie is a good animation movie that tells about a best of relationship between a dog and a boy.

  18. Writing II Assignment
    Meeting :
    Name / nim : Revani Oktavia Ningsih/14040112

    Big Hero 6

    Big Hero 6 is a 2014 American 3D computer-animated superhero comedy film. The film is set in a fictional futuristic hybrid metropolis called San Fransokyo. The actor called Hiro, Hiro hamada. He has one brother, Tadashi. Tadashi and Hiro lives with their aunt because their parents has passed away several years ago.

    Hiro Hamada is a young genius and robotics expert. He spends his time participating in illegal robot fights. His brother Tadashi worried that Hiro is wasting his potential.Tadashi takes Hiro to the robotics lab at his school, The San Fransokyo Institute of Technology.There, Hiro meets Tadashi’s closest friends: Wasabi, Honey lemon, Go Go Tomago, Fred as well as Baymax, a personal healthcare robot Tadashi created. Hiro also meets professor Robert Callaghan.

    Amazed by the student’s projects, Hiro decided to enroll in that school. Tadashi and his friends help Hiro designs his own robotics project in order to gain a personal invitation via an annual exhibition. Hiro is success with his own robotics project. His invention, Microbots, a type of nanorobotics can control telepathically. His invention impresses Callaghan and Alistair Krei. Krei wants to buy Microbots, but Callaghan successfully convinces Hiro not to make a deal.

    Hiro losing his brother caused by a fire suddenly breaks out in the exhibition hall. And then Hiro shuts himself away in his room and isolates himself from others for two weeks. One day, Hiro accidentally activates Baymax, who responded by Hiro’s feelings and conditions. Hiro find a single Microbot that was left in his jacket. Baymax follows the microbot to the warehouse. They discover that someone has been producing Hiro’s microbots. Following their single microbots, they find the masked man and had a battle.

    Hiro put away the mask and knows that masked man is professor callaghan. Hiro becomes angry and removes Baymax’s health care chip then orders him to kill callaghan. Baymax becomes a mindless killing machine and goes on a rampage in an attempt to kill callaghan, who is powerless without the microbots. Go Go, Fred, Wasabi and reinsert his chip, but callaghan escapes in the process, get back the mask.

    At the end, hero and his friends win the fight, and later Hiro settles into Tadashi’s lab, he discovers Baymax’s healthcare chip within the rocket hand. He successfully rebuilds Baymax’s body and reactivates him and they happily reunite. The six friends continue their exploits through the city, helping those in need as the Big Hero 6.

  19. Name : Yulia Eka Putri
    NPM : 14040124
    Title of Essay : Romantic Movie Tenggelamnya Kapal Van Der Wijck

    A ship that when did a voyage sink in the sea. That shi is netherland ship. That event is inportant event for a young girl, hayati. Hayati is a woman from padang. Many story that happend by hayati.

    First, hayati was do a relation with zainudin. Zainudin is a man from makasar. But hayati”s uncle disagreewith their relation because zainudin have not unculturad tribal group while, minang society more glorifided.

    Second, hayati”s uncle will meriage hayati with a wealthy person that is Mr. Aziz. Hayati felt favorable and supressed in contras. Zainudin felt frustation and sick a few days.he felt hayati was be tray him.after a long time, hayati”s husband default and he died.

    Zainudin hear that news and ask hayati back to hometown. Hayati agree and back with netherland ship, hayati felt that ship will be sink and see give a picture to someone in other that give again to zainudin.Netherland ship sink in the sea and cuse all pessenger in the ship.

    In conclution, different culture not obcure a relation. If the mater still hapend will be make a accsident and destruction.

  20. Name : Izel Sapitri
    NPM : 14040126
    Title of Essay : Movie of Jack the Giant Slayer Give We Many Knowledge

    Movie of The giant is perfomance make spectator learn be honest person and how to be of the best people. In this movie show the Giant, Princes name is isabelle and Young Man is name Jack with Soldier of Castle name is Cloister. We have to know, the people always want function because when someone have function as a result onther people be bent down. This mater make the Soldier of Castile become struggle and want to carry away power from the king. At the time the young Man tryed to help the King and save the Princes.
    The Young Man have a uncle is farmer and he only a farmer and poor but he do not lazy around to read a book, this matter proven with he have many a book. We know many experience and science can we get from the book. Such us, when we readed we know about Tecnology, Life Style and Globalisasi in this Era. It means when someone like so much read a book then they are have insight full.
    The Soldier of struggle is person that belief of the king, but function make they are came greedy and deceive of the king. besides the King is the person that wise,also misfortune the soldier. From this moment we get knowledge is when somebody do all of the best therefore luck will follow him in contrast people is dishonest can be misery.
    The Princes a girl is friendly and diligent. She went visited citizenry for introdius her populace. She is heir of castile. On the other hand, she not arrogant. For example, she endanger him self only to wacth of drama together her citizenry. Usualy the person have function can be arrogan and conceited because they are fill have of all.
    The movie of the giant give we matter is positive to came person is get many knowlwdge, loyal for somethink that we choose or we decision, and not all that we have will eternal. In addition we must to informality. Many reason make person become bootlicker but they are can be beaten by they do it because wise will be campion.

  21. Name: susi siswanti
    Npm : 11040295
    2014(d)
    Muj’se dosti karoge

    At mumbay in india city ,there were three people friendly ,they were Tina,Puja,and Raj . Tina has beautiful girl ,smart,slimbody sweet smile ,and cheerful. Puja was calm girl sweet and friendly ,while Raj was a man who has strong body tall ,pointed nose and looked so cute when smilling.

    At the time, Raj and his parent went to america because his father have a new job .In there Raj always sent email or letter to Tina but Tina did not want reply Raj’s email .Tina always busy with her activities such, dance,swam, and etc. Puja knew about Raj’s letter ,and she replied without Raj knew ,actually ,Raj felt love Tina.

    Then ,Raj come back to india,he has become mature and handsome Man. Tina and Puja and their families were waiting Raj at the train station .Raj walked down and walked on to Tina .Puja was sad because Raj did not realize that Puja who has replied his email during that time.

    After that, Tina,Raj and Puja spent their Tina together .Raj said to Tina that the falling in love to her .Tina was happy and received Raj’s statement .They were be a couple .At the time ,Raj.knew about someone who has always replied his email. She was puja .He was disspointed to Tina .He was broken heart .He promised that he just loving a girl who had been replied his email.Tina was regret ,and apologized to Raj.

    Finally, Raj forgave tina’s mistake, but Raj wanted to Puja will be his wife .Puja.and Raj married and live happily.

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  23. Nila karmila
    11040031

    Characteristic my best friends

    I have best friends, we have different characteristic. Because different characteristic that, we be friends interesting. We have different characteristic that make us so funny and less crazy. I think different characteristic make life so wonderful and interesting.
    First name my best friend is susridayanti, I call her icuss, this is name popular with us. She so funny and little lazy. Why I say she littel lazy, because every Sunday she is do not anything. She just watching Korean movie. She is very like Korean movie. Even though she is like that, she is a good person, I like be friend with her.
    Second name best friend is musida, I call her is ucy. So different name with nick mane. This is name popular too with us. Ucy shay a person same with me. She is beautiful girl and tall.
    She is very like india movie, from all my best friends just ucy like india movie. I don’t know why she very loved with india movie. But there little characteristic I don’t like with her is easy offended.
    Third name best friend is maya. Maya have characteristic difficult to understanding. She is very long doing anything such as, take a bath and grooming. She is easy crying if speak with her boyfriend. On the contrary she is a good person and care with her friends.
    This is my best friends, susridayanti, mursida, and maya, we have different characteristic. Different that make us another to understanding and wonderful. My best friends make my life colorful and happy. When I have problem they make me laugh with joke them. Sometime they too resents and less crazy. Besides that, they so funny and care with me.
    I like with them and love you so much.

  24. Name : Fitri wulandari
    NPM :14040117 / D
    Title : The important of English language

    english is one important aspests that should be possessed by students. Therefore, English is an international language that will support communication with other people. Moreover, today many references supporting lectures in English, so students need to improve their English.

    English is not only used to communicate directly, but also supports students to improve their knowledge and lecture. Curently the latest references are mostly English language print and online or the internet. In addition, to support the ability to speak English would be nice campus student conduct or bring in professors from other universities or living aboard, as well as holding an international seminar dealing with the English lanuage. These opportunities will certainly use the English language.

    Therefore, students should improve English languge skills by doing various associated with it. such as writing articles, following discussions, debates, and speeches contest, in addition to English speaking, must also master the theme, then dare to speak in public and others.

    English language skills can also be optimized by following the English debate competition. Debate can also provide motivation related to the importance of the English language. In the debate competition, especially English, participants in addition to having English skills must also be able to hone their knowledge and critical thinking. We must have the courage to express opinions and understanding of what has been delivered.

    English is necessery to hold as supporting lectures at the university. Because English is an international language that we will use to communicate with others. In addition, the English language can also be used in variety of activities. Therefore, we must improve the ability to speak English.

  25. Mayang Tiara
    12040135/14D

    EDUCATION AND LEARNING ENGLISH

    The best way getting success in the future. Many manner can you do to get success in your future besides keep effort you also have education. Education very important to our future because it is help you being the smart person that can help you getting good job and if you have the good job it means you future is success.
    In my opinion, the learning language best choice to our future because the first English is an international language so you can communicated with foreign people. Second, English language skill it would be added value for yourself. They will consider your skill so English language have benefits to our good future.
    Learning English is good to improving or ability especially if learned in universItiy. University is the great place where the students will be graduate after they have completed their studies so that students have legitimate diploma that can bring when they are want enter the new job.
    Learning English language in university also benefits to our future because in university have lecturer who have experiences that can sharing to our. Based on their experiences we can take lesson and motivation. Besides that learning English in university be training our being confident because there are students doing presentation about their lesson.
    Overall,many ways that you do for the good future. The most important is good education it makes we have the knowledge that can be equipped in the future. English is also one of the lessons were very helpful as an international language and preparing for the international job competitions.

    • Name : Mayang Tiara
      Npm : 12040135
      Date : October,25,2015
      EDUCATION AND LEARNING ENGLISH

      The best way getting success in the future. Many manner can you do to get success in your future besides keep effort you also have education. Education very important to our future becasuse it is help you being the smart person that can help you getting good job and if you have the good job it means you future is success
      Education not only make you are smart person but it is also very important to establish a person’s character antd attitude, such as a child who is not school will be different with a child who has school.example, in speaking a child has school will speak more polite than a child not school..
      In my opinion, the learning language best choice to our future because the first english is an international language so you can communicated with foreign people. Second, english language skill it would be added value for yourself. They will consider your skill .such as if you recomendation an applicaton letter then with you are skill in English language ,the leader of that company will be interesting and accepted you to join in his company. Therefor, English language have benefits to our good future.
      Learning english is good to improving or ability especially if learned in universtiy. University is the great place where the students will be graduate after they have completed their studies so that students have legitimate diploma that can bring when they are want enter the new job.
      Learning english language in university also benefits to our future because in university have lacturers who have experiences that can sharing to our. Based on their experiences we can take lesson and motivation. Besides that learning english in university be training our being confident because there are students doing presentation about their lesson.such as the students conducted performance to explained theor task who gave by their teacher.
      Overall,many ways that you do for the good future. The most important is good education it makes we have the knowledge that can be equipped in the future. English is also one of the lessons were very helpful as an international language and preparing for the international job competitions.

    • Name : Mayang Tiara
      Npm : 12040135
      Date : October,25,2015

      EDUCATION AND LEARNING ENGLISH (revision)

      The best way getting success in the future. Many manner can you do to get success in your future besides keep effort you also have education. Education very important to our future becasuse it is help you being the smart person that can help you getting good job and if you have the good job it means you future is success
      Education not only make you are smart person but it is also very important to establish a person’s character antd attitude, such as a child who is not school will be different with a child who has school.example, in speaking a child has school will speak more polite than a child not school..
      In my opinion, the learning language best choice to our future because the first english is an international language so you can communicated with foreign people. Second, english language skill it would be added value for yourself. They will consider your skill .such as if you recomendation an applicaton letter then with you are skill in English language ,the leader of that company will be interesting and accepted you to join in his company. Therefor, English language have benefits to our good future.
      Learning english is good to improving or ability especially if learned in universtiy. University is the great place where the students will be graduate after they have completed their studies so that students have legitimate diploma that can bring when they are want enter the new job.
      Learning english language in university also benefits to our future because in university have lacturers who have experiences that can sharing to our. Based on their experiences we can take lesson and motivation. Besides that learning english in university be training our being confident because there are students doing presentation about their lesson.such as the students conducted performance to explained theor task who gave by their teacher.
      Overall,many ways that you do for the good future. The most important is good education it makes we have the knowledge that can be equipped in the future. English is also one of the lessons were very helpful as an international language and preparing for the international job competitions.

  26. Nama : nike tria wulandari
    Npm. : 14040102

    . HOLIDAY TO MANDEH PEAK

    Last sunday, I and my family went holiday to mandeh peak we departured to mandeh peak on 12.30 pm.the travelling was very amazing but little made tired.on 14.30 pm.we arrived an mandeh peak.
    The view it was very beautiful.from the top of peak I can see that was beautiful and smalls of islands but,that made us little confused was view that beautiful was covered by foggy,but consist beautiful
    In mandeh peak we took picture and are together,after that we prepared to back home.we departured from mandeh peak on 16.00 pm we were tired,but we were hapoy.during travelling to padang we slept and we arrived at home 18.00 pm
    It was my experince ,this holiday never I forget because I think it is very interesting and impressing

  27. Name : OKTAMILANI
    Nim : 14040089 C
    Essay Title : The Best Vacation Ever In My Life

    The best vacation that I have in my life was going to paddy field.

    I went there with my family. In that place, we visited cocoa, paddy, and find many adorable animals. For examples worms,snake, ant.

    Paddy field indeed the most beautiful place ever. Because not everyone has the time to visit. Unlike the beaches, mall, and other vacation spots. In the paddy field we can see the natural beauty of the real, surrounded by lots of trees and grass.

    The cool air made we comfortable and appetite is high. And we spent a lot of foods.

    Eating at the banana leaf, I like because it is still natural and rice that we eat tastes better than eating the plate.

    Coconut trees neatly lined up on the edge of rice fields and I try to pick up and drink. It is a practical way to get rid of thirst with a cool coconut water.

    All I can say that the best vacation in my life was visiting paddy field.

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  29. Name : Elia Sofiana
    NPM : 11040062/14 D

    My Lovely Family

    I was born of a simple family loving. Each of the problems facing each other will always be faithful to share both a difficult problem, and happy.
    My family consists of a mother who is always there for me, a father who always encouraged, and the brothers were always entertaining. Although my younger and I have many differences.
    Like my younger who first had a selfish, stubborn, but always dear to me, my younger were both more mature in dealing with all the problems that exist in our family, and the last, my younger this one is spoiled and pampered by family me because maybe he was the only brother in my family, but even though we have the character and personality of each one, we always knew we were one as a family to love each other always with each other.
    Therefore, I really love and honest my family, because in life as long as I feel that family is the most honestly and always there when I need it and have a lot of problems.

  30. Name : Ratih Widianingsih
    NPM :11040024/14D

    My Interesting Story with My Roommate in Vacation

    I and my roommate, Nurul, Radia when to vacation to have refresh our self, because we have problem, such as bored, tired, and stress in our activity.
    We went to Pariaman beach, Padang beach, Nobita Hill.
    The first, we went to Pariaman beach because Nurul not yet going to the Pariaman beach, in there we ate together and sign seeing in the beach I and Radia`s opinian about Pariaman beach very interesting and beautiful place, and Nurul very happy because its the first experience to Pariaman beach, the second we going to Nobita Hill, we are very exited also because this is the first interesting adventure for our go to danger place such as climb, far, and quiet.
    And the last our interesting adventure get to Padang beach, in there I and my roommate Radia, Nurul ate kerupuk kuah sate, and take a picture together, so very wonderfull.
    I am very exited with our adventure and we mention it the interesting story for our life togetgher, and we very happy can meet the same boarding house at street.Kimia no.53a, because I and other roommate can give spirit and understand one of other can give honestly in our life.

  31. Nama : Ayu anira
    Npm : 13040233
    Essay tittle : The main interest for a career woman or a marriage

    The main interest for a career woman or a marriage. People say that marriage, there is the end of a career woman. Many woman say that they will only take care of the family after marriage. Otherwise, they are also those who say a career after marriage even more enjoyable. Besides taking care of the household and their families can also be a career. For example; married women who can sell online with a laptop and a smartphone all women can do business at home without disturbing the activities housewife.

    In fact in western women prefer to marry at older ages and they are more concerned with career. Whereas many medical experts say women who were married in the old age difficult to get offspring. While in our own country many women who choose to marry young because of the culture and religion that is still strong. Most parents in Indonesia feared that her daughter married at the age of old because of the tradition of women that age 25 is considered appropriate to marry.

    Therefore career after or before marriage depends on each individual. When a women decides to pursue a career then definitely thinks it’s also important to get married but if we could enjoy a longer youth why not.

  32. Name : LIZA MARZAWATI
    Nim : 14040095 C
    Essay Title : My best holiday in Batam

    My Best Holiday In Batam

    Holiday in Batam is the most memorable of my life. 24 August 2015, my family and I went on vacation to spend our time. We went to Batam by plane from padang. We really enjoyed our trip. After 50 minutes spent our time on the road, we finally arrived at the island of Batam. We visited the island of Batam for one week and stayed at the home of my sisters.

    The second day on the island of Batam, we visited the bridge Barelang. Barelang bridge is a beautiful place. That day the weather was sunny, We really enjoyed the beautiful scenery and we took a picture together.

    The third day, we visited Nagoya mall. Nagoya is a place for shopping, for example, sell t-shirts, bags, shoes, and much more. We walked around the store to see what we can buy. Finally, I bought a bag and t-shirt, while my mother and my brother bought many items as gifts for friends.

    Our fourth day on the island of Batam, we went to the beach which is known for its beauty and the waves are big, the marina beach. Marina beach is a great place to surf and see the sunset. There we found a lot of tourists. I tried to make conversation with him to test my English skills. They came from England, who honeymooned there. They say that the beautiful island of Batam. Unfortunately, strong winds and dangerous. We just sat on the beach.

    The next day, we went to Panbil Mall. We bought souvenirs for my family in the village. Afterwards, we returned home my sister. The last day in Batam, we are ready to return to padang, it is time for us to go home. we really enjoy the natural beauty and hospitality.

    In conclusion, it’s my best holiday in batam and I will never forget the valuable experience I was there, and wish I could go back again.

  33. NAMA : LAILA SEPTIA HIDAYATI
    NPM : 14040077/C
    TITTLE : NEW SHOES FOR PAK MAHMUD

    I live with my familly in Alpan. I was born there at 12 September 1994. I have two brothers. hmmm I forget to tell about some one that I am so proud of him. He is a hard worker, he’s also an awesome man. ” Assalamualaikum pakkk” I said it every time I meet himm. Pak Mahmud is my neighbour. his house is next to my house. Pak Mahmud is a shoemaker. but he has an old shoes, because he has no money to make a new shoes. I have ever try to give him a new one but he refuse it due to he’s shoes has hisrorical value, it is given by his beloved wife that has died.

    but I am not give up to try for giving him a new shoes. one day I decided to be his worker, he refused me as he did not has money to pay my work. but I said that I just looked for experience. he accepted me directly. after a mounth I can make a shoes. I heve ever gotten trough a night for making a shoes, the beautiful one, speciall for Pak Mahmud.

    After a week I gave the shoes to Pak Mahmud and he was shocked as I gave it. Pak Mahmud cried and tried to wear the shoes… and he said to me” you know what, why I will not make or buy a new shoes. it because I am waiting for some one yo make a new shoes for me, thank you so muchh kidddd” we cried together…

  34. Name : Pandu Febrian
    NPM : 14040071
    Genre: Narrative text
    Essay title : My First Love

    First love is an event that will never be forgotten for a person with a wonderful experience. So is with me. I feel the first love so beautiful when I was in high school, or rather when I was in grade 2. When I only know that it is only a courtship-beloved pity, but after I was going out with her so I knew what it was courtship real.

    Her name is Agnes. Our dating approximately 2 years or until graduation. Our age range is only a year away. Although beyond the age he’s only one year, but she is more mature and more logical thinking of herfriends were the same age as her. That’s what makes me so comfort with her. She also is a diligent personal piety and worship. We remind each other to pray when we are busy with our own affairs. Difficulty glad we spent together. When he was a problem, I always accompany her and that she is so comfortable when she was next to me. As did I when again no problem, she is always with me or listen to my complaints until the end. And not infrequently she often gives me motivation or constructive criticism to me.

    Our relationship goes after more than a year, the problem we had feared finally came. Our initial quarrel started when she saw the content of my messages to another girl. she did not call me for over a month. I tried to reach her and always to no avail. Then I went to her house, and she turned out to have around the house and being alone with another guy. Angry and disappointed mixed there in me at that time. Without directly mentioning silent I broke word of mouth. She asked what the reason, but I only replied with the answer “We are no longer appropriate”. She accepted it. And our relationship that existed a year it ran aground with a sad ending. Something I did not expect.

    Finally my first love so beautiful was broke up. My conclusion is that when you find your first love, I hope you keep it and I hope that the relationship did not happen as I experienced at that moment. Keep your relationship in order to remain in harmony, without any problems whatsoever. If there is a problem with a good finish well.

  35. NAME: REVANI OKTAVIA NINGSIH
    NIM: 14040112

    THE IMPORTANT OF ENGLISH LANGUAGE

    Language is one of instrument to communicate for people in the world. English is foreign language for Indonesian people. Education and learning English is very important, then important for every body. The reason is:
    First, to get a job. Many companies require their employees who good in English,so that they can communicate with the company’s International clients. And the client feel comfortable with us. And also we will be easier in the office.
    Second, IT. We use technology everyday. Examples; phone, computer, and another types of gadget. In general, that’s all use English language. Many of the worlds top films, books, and music are published and produced in English. Most of content produced on the internet in English.
    Then, knowledge, travel, finding new friends. When you can speak English very well, you will be easy anytime. You can travel all over the world and do not afraid to speak first, get the knowledge like culture,habbit,history and the range of the country that you visit. And also you will get the new friends in the side of world.
    to learn english I hope students can compete in national and international working world and become entrepreneurs by opening English language courses. Also go to the global market, can begin online shop with instagram,tweeter,facebook and others. Then shipping to all over the world.
    In conclusion, English can open your world, get more benefit. can speak English will be having a lot of friends from various countries and make you comfortable speak with foreign friend.

    • “Revani, you have good ideas on the importance of English language. The order of ideas is clear and I can read your writing clearly.
      One thing that should be added to your writing is to improve the details for each of your paragraphs. The topic sentences are identifiable, though.
      Please add space between paragraphs to make your writing readable. Keep on writing!” – Mr. Syayid.

  36. Name: Abdi Juwan
    NPM : 12040189
    Essay Title : Education Language Is Art

    “When the young people who have studied in school and consider themselves too high and smart to merge with the people who work with picks and only have a modest ideals, then better education is not provided at all”
    yan said it was tan Malacca in his book entitled Madilog. is not education that teaches pride to muridnya.karna education is an art that is free and education friendly itself comes from the Greek word meaning lead her children. in Indonesia there are some figures that upholds that education is the most important thing in life. one of them is of Ki Hajar Dewantara with the slogan “tut wuri Handayani” which means Tut Wuri: follow from behind and handayani means giving moral support or encouragement.

    moved from the era of contemporary education is not considered important, many parents do not send their children on the grounds that money can buy everything. so even though a child has never been to school, but when he has his money will still be delicious even without education. one of the lessons in the world of education is learning English. as we know it today English is the language that is needed to welcome the free market. not only that, to learn the English language we know as an international language would not hurt us as Indonesia that as a developing country for its study. so we can help Indonesia in its development period. John F Kennedy once said, ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country. let’s think about what we’ve done for our country

    there is nothing wrong with learning the language and life of other countries other Malak quote Tan said, Learn from the West, but do not be a copycat West, but be a smart student from the East. This citation teaches many things, one of the study to the west so that we are not fooled and colonized Indonesia AGAIN .berbicara of the state would not be separated from youth or student owned a country. the progress or regress of a country will depend heavily on the creation and the art of young people. it summed up clearly as a function of youth as agents of change. speaking young people would not be separated from students who are regarded as the gold of his nation. according to the author students need to learn English as an international language. because as was said above the first row of the youth was to keep the country from colonialism.

    in education for students should not only students taking the concentration of English who learn English. because as mentioned above the English language is very useful for all the affairs of the world. human beings as essentially as individual and social beings in desperate need of communication. with the English language we know as the international language of a man certainly can communicate broadly and globally. by being able to communicate globally, every business and needs required would be much easier. either in the world or relations and other jobs.

    Language is an art that is often ignored by most people. a lot of people do not want to learn the language, both its own native language or languages which are considered foreign. education itself is one of the most ignored by many people. whereas education is an art that teaches about the world. but a great education there would be no use if it is not applied and practiced. as was narrated from Jabir, Rasullah Shallallahualaihiwassalam said: “And the best of men are the most helpful to other humans”

    • Interesting essay, Abdi Juwan. You had used quotation in the beginning of your essay. However, I wonder what might be the source. Was it from book or somewhere? Also, the ideas are clear. You have them written down on your essay solidly, but I suggest that each of your paragraphs need to have cohesion by applying cohesive devices. The unity of your essay needs further attention. On top of that, your essay is interesting. Keep writing and reading! Mr. Syayid

  37. NAME:APRILISA Winda Putri
    NPM:14040101
    ESSAY TITLE:Holiday to beach

    The story my experience during my elementary school and my family outing to beach.I had gone to use private cars.My journey taking 5 hours,I left home at 8.00 am to 2 pm there.At that time the nets are still bad so very long time.
    First,One the way I saw a very beautiful scenery.When he got there I saw many people who were in the shower.Arriving at the beach .I immediately change clothes should be in the bathroom.Suddenly I went into the bathroom smelled rich bathroom not year.I immediately change clothes quickly frightened I fainted in the bathroom and I immediately came out.

    second,I ran to the beach and swim,cool swim again I call my father told to eat.And while my first swim I hungry and star eating.Lucky I still miss the barbecued chicken and then I immediately swim again using its tires.Suddenly I do not know my sister with my brother.

    Third,Then I called by father said I do not want the boat ride,I immediately replied yes.I ran scared to miss a board the boat was run around the island.Do not feel the time is afternoon,sea water began to ride.I have bee riding boat scared drowning and I get dressed and go home .I do not feel directly sleep I slept surprisingly quickly to the house.

    Next,At the time I Junior high school I went again to beach but,I am not my family’s departure.Departure with friend schoolmate.I went by bus,my departure at 10 mid trip I was surprised my first,fitting bad way now anyway already like toll and take a very fast time taken just 3 hours.Once there,change a lot of people are on vacation used to fit the time still the beach.

    Concluding,Then change clothes do not smell like bathroom.I ran straight to beach swimming with friend moment invite friends to play beach.I said beach not fell the time is afternoon.And then I went to home.

  38. Name: Rino Irawan
    NPM : 14040076
    Genre : Descriptive Essay
    Essay Title : Creative progress of younger generation in Padang

    Younger generation in modern times must be able to forward thinking and creative of various fields, the creative progress is also owned by the younger generation in Padang. Cause the creative is very important to develop the human’s characteristics, and it will be needed in the future for jobs. The creative habitual could explain the quality of an individual on the socialize.

    First, progress in the field fashion of young generation in Padang. Young generation in Padang very update of trends fashion in Indonesia or the other country, that can be seen from the new brand of young generation in Padang, for example; “kapuyuak” clothes’ brand. These brands sell shirts and accessories inscribed “kapuyuak” which means is cockroaches. This brand is already known in various provinces on Sumatra Island, and being loved by young people. The young generation of Padang city also has creative idea to promote their brands, such as holding an event about fashion.

    Second, development of the creativity by the younger generation in the field of music is very good, varied, and also there are a lot of genres of music at this time, such as rock music, pop music and other. The development of music in Padang city is also very rapidly as evidenced by the existence of band by young generation with a variety of unique genre such as jazz, reggae, and others. The young generation of Padang city also hold music event, so that the band of Padang became better known by many people.

    Third, the young generation is now very fond of sport to form the body or to health. Type of sport also diverse but the favorite sport much be liked with young generation, cause it is extreme and unique sport such as mountain climbing, rock climbing and other and sport like that is also being favorite by the younger generation of Padang, they form communities that match their interest, with the purpose to make the sport of Padang city is growing; for example Padang BMX community.

    Last, the development of the field of art and photography of young people in the city of Padang was also very nice and creative. Field of dance, painting, theater, or photography. Currently the most popular is the photography. Young people in Padang are also formed various photographic community in order to bring together people who also like the photography to share knowledge about photography. They also held a variety of photography exhibitions.

    In conclusions we as the younger generation should be able to be creative in the face of changing times in any field. As well as the younger generation in Padang must have a creative progress in various fields to increase the quality of the human’s power in Indonesia.

  39. Name: Nurwahyuni
    NPM : 14040073
    Genre : Descriptive Essay
    Essay Title : WHAT HAPPEN WITH INDONESIAN GOVERNMENT ?

    Actually Indonesian is big county, Indonesian is the rice county, Indonesian have many abundance property. Between about it, Indonesian have land fertile where is live many the type of vegetable, fruit, and Indonesian have many species medicine consisting of many difference items. But although actually the economic of Indonesian inside the bad of situation.

    What happen with my county specially of Indonesian? Many people be alive in underline destitution, they are hard working full time every day, but they are accept small wages, it’s not proper from some people in Indonesian.

    One more, the big question on my brain what happen with Indonesian?, study in the school is something very expensive in Indonesian. From the some people’s in Indonesian they are student’s of Indonesian be order to choose among study or work. Then they are Indonesian children wont to choose for the work “ help the parent “ it’s the reason close from mouth Indonesian children in Indonesian. Government not take something the action like as they are administration in Indonesian close eyes, and the close ears about it.

    Conclusion, the people’s of Indonesian must be honesty with the government system. Look as they are people in Indonesian not show by government, and than people of Indonesian don’t know about government system.

  40. Name: Mailani Utaria Ilma
    NPM : 14040078
    Genre : Narrative Essay
    Essay Title : Some unexpected moments on the way to pamutusan island

    I and my friends Sukma, Ayu, Mezi, Rika, Melia and Irvan went to Pamutusan Island on Wednesday, October 14th. Pamutusan Island was a small island with white sand, shallow and clear water, cool wind and beautiful view with other small island around it. It was located on Sungai Pisang. It was about 90 minutes we could reach by motorcycle. We were very enjoy our trip there. But, when we were on the way to get there, we find some unexpected moments that we could not forget.
    Firstly, we went to Pamutusan Island without our friend, Bertha. When Ayu, Mezi, Sukma, Melia and I were Rika’s dorm, Bertha called Ayu and said that she can not join with us. She told that her parents were angry because she was lie to them yesterday. She said that she went with Ayu, but actually, she went with her boyfriend and come home too late. Consequently, they did not allow her to go. Althogh we were very dissapointed, we had to go without her because we had booked the boat in the harbour.
    Secondly, we lost on Gantiang. From Rika’s dorm, we went to Imam Bonjol park. Then, we found a junction, we should choose the right turning. But because of confuse, we choose the left one. No one of us realized that we choose the wrong way, untill we stopped on a red traffic light and found Reksodiwiryo Hospital. Sukma was the first person who realized that we were lost. She said that we should turn right, not turn left. From the traffic light, we turn back to the junction and turn right to Ranah street.
    Thirdly, Mezi and I fell down from our motorcycle. The sreet to get to the harbour was very bad. There were many ascent, descent, a sharp bent and the hole everywhere. Mezi could not handle the motorcycle. Fortunatelly, we got no scare or pain. Mezi and I wanted to continue the trip, but Irvan asked us to change the driver. Sukma drove Mezi’s motorcycle while me with Irvan’s motorcycle. Melia went with Ayu and Rika drove her motorcycle alone. We drove our motorcycle slowly and stay close each other.
    After 90 minutes on the way, we arrived at the harbour and just took 15 minutes in the boat to get to Pamutusan Island. At there, we were very happy. Irvan, Sukma, Rika and Ayu went swim while Melia, Mezi and I sat on the sand near to them and took some pictures. We did not buy any food because we brought our own foods. I and Melia cooked them. We ate on a big rock under a tree near to seashore. Overall, the trip to Pamutusan island was an unforgettable experience, especially, some unexpected moments on the way to get there.

  41. Name Laila Septia Hidayati
    NPM 14040077
    Title My sweet memory

    I was born in Alahan Panjang, Solok on 12 September 1994. I have two brothers their name are Riki and Fajri. I love them very much. We spend our time together in our village.

    when I was young I have ever worn my brother’s clothes. my arents were laugh. and my brother was angry because I ware his clothes.
    I asked for sorry to him due to I make his clothe break.

  42. Name: Fauziah
    NPM: 14040098
    Essay Title: Birthday Party My Friend 20th Eca

    When Eca’s birthday i had bad story with my friend. I and my friend made surprise in my house for eca. I, Indri, Aldisyu, Dini, and Fadli binding plan to fence my house. Then doused with water, making Eca turned white as flour and less fun if not a filthy of eggs.

    What we think and what we want does not correspond to reality. Eca came to my house with her boyfriend, we used to call him bang Dede. We were overwhelmed because we shirk to him.

    Indry just pull Eca regardierss bang Dede, i and Dini helped Indri to do it. Eca finished tied after flushing and the time to change to white as flour and certainly makes fishy with eggs. As we were went to throw eggs, bang dede spontaneous to protect Eca. Oh my god, what is? We are shy and embarrassed to him.

    Finally, we give the gifts for her. She say this birthday is the funniest during her lifetime.

  43. Name: Novi Anisyah
    NPM : 14040105
    Essay Title : Getting lost in the carnival

    When I was a kid, I had a very horrible experience. It happened when I was about 5 years old. At that time, my parents and I went along to see carnival in town. On that day, we went by walking to the place because our house was not so far away.

    After arriving there, my father, my mother, and I looked so many interesting shows. I was very happy because it was my first experience of seeing the carnival. I still remember when my father took me to see the magic show, carousel ride, and entered the haunted house. I really enjoyed that night.

    After walking around, we rested in a place. I forgot its name, I knew it was a place where a lot of people sitting around eating their meal. Then the three of us were resting there. When I was a child, I was very active and did not like silence. And so at the evening, when my parents were chatting, I went alone to see the clown. I followed the clown until I realized that I was lost and missing. I was trying to get back to the place where my parents were.
    However, they were no longer there. I was confused and scared. Then I looked for them from one place to another but I could not find them as well. Even I was getting lost. Finally I cried. I was afraid if they left me alone.

    When I was crying, someone approached me. Then he took me to a security post. I saw my father and mother there. They looked so panicky. Especially my mother, I saw her crying. When the men took me to them, my parents came right up to me and hugged me. I was happy because I could see them again. We also were very grateful to the man who had helped me, even though I did not know his name. That was a frightening experience that I have ever had. Until now, I still remember what happened that night.

  44. Name: Rara Permata Sari
    NPM : 14040097
    Essay Title : SCARY NIGHT

    Once night,when 11:00 pm suddenly the lights in the complex home to die, when the lights go out I was still awake and cool to play mobile phone, but when the lights go out that everyone in the house was on the sleep.

    When the time is cool to play mobile phone in the room, even if the lights go out and everyone was in the sleep,suddenly heard a child’s voice crying, at that time I thought maybe the neighbor boy next door who was crying, but after I heard clearly the sound of crying not from my next-door neighbor, then I heard again the sound was like a cat fight, so I think maybe that’s the sound of cats fighting.

    However, long-added voice was getting louder cries seemed to be like the sound of crying children mingled with the sound of cats fighting, so that made me become more fearful, then hurry made directly to bed and stop playing mobile phone.

    When I tried to make sleep by closing the ears wearing a pillow so that the sound was not and tried to impose to sleep. when it also cries were louder, so that makes me even more scared and cold sweats.

    The cushion above the ears and hiding behind the blanket, I looked at the clock on the phone that is shown at 11:30, which means the sound of weeping was already half an hour did not stop and louder.

    Feeling increasingly fear the voice crying out of nowhere came, made me always pray silently asking for the protection of Allah SWT, once it was the sound of the motorcycle through and suddenly the voice was gone and the lights were instantly revived, and citizens a voice came awake and wondered would the sound of crying is not clear where that comes from.

  45. Nama : putri andika nofra
    Npm : 14040091
    Essay title : about my self

    My name is Putri Andika Nofra. I was born on sawahlunyo 19 october 1995. I have two sister, i first daughter of three sister. My sister is Riska Asri Nofra she is beautiful and smart. She still study in senior high school in my town. She eer winner olympiad of mathematics. And my young sister is Tisya permata nofra she still elementry school, she also beuatiful and smart. I very lucky because born of parent that loving us. My parent always teach me about education,culture,religi and love.
    Many people said that me and sister are twin. We often joke and sometimes we bicker with another. I live in jakarta until 5 years old. Afterthat, we back to sawahlunto and stay in here until now. I was study in TK pertiwi sawahlunto for 2 years because my body too small and short, many people unvelieve that i be able continue to elementry school. Then, i was study in SDN 05. In there i have many friends, i have close friend her name vina, now she study in jakarta state university. We always together untill junior high school but we separate when continue to senior high school. I choose to be continue in IT vocational school.
    When i was vocational school, i confused to selected course because many course about technology and art in there. I wanna be a proggramer and technician computer and i want choose technique computer network. but my parent dont allow me and they ask me to take course about art as multimedia. And then with perfoce i choose that course. I learn how to make a movie,animation,web,photoediting,etc. Beside that i also learn about assemble PC. Its so difficult beause part inside of CPU too small.when i was study in IT vocational school i have a boyfriend. He is my senior of my school now he is study in UPI YPTK padang with information system department. Beside that hebis cousin of my bestfriend when elementry school her name vina. Our introduce like a movie and i dont believe until now still together with him.

  46. Nama : putri andika nofra
    Npm : 14040091
    Essay title : about my self

    My name is Putri Andika Nofra. I was born on sawahlunyo 19 october 1995. I have two sister, i first daughter of three sister. My sister is Riska Asri Nofra she is beautiful and smart. She still study in senior high school in my town. She ever winner olympiad of mathematics. And my young sister is Tisya permata nofra she still elementry school, she also beuatiful and smart. I very lucky because born of parent that loving us. My parent always teach me about education,culture,religi and love.
    Many people said that me and sister are twin. We often joke and sometimes we bicker with another. I live in jakarta until 5 years old. Afterthat, we back to sawahlunto and stay in here until now. I was study in TK pertiwi sawahlunto for 2 years because my body too small and short, many people unvelieve that i be able continue to elementry school. Then, i was study in SDN 05. In there i have many friends, i have close friend her name vina, now she study in jakarta state university. We always together untill junior high school but we separate when continue to senior high school. I choose to be continue in IT vocational school.

    When i was vocational school, i confused to selected course because many course about technology and art in there. I wanna be a proggramer and technician computer and i want choose technique computer network. but my parent dont allow me and they ask me to take course about art as multimedia. And then with perfoce i choose that course. I learn how to make a movie,animation,web,photoediting,etc. Beside that i also learn about assemble PC. Its so difficult beause part inside of CPU too small.when i was study in IT vocational school i have a boyfriend. He is my senior of my school now he is study in UPI YPTK padang with information system department. Beside that hebis cousin of my bestfriend when elementry school her name vina. Our introduce like a movie and i dont believe until now still together with him.

  47. Name : Mezi Rahmadani
    NPM : 14040084 (2014 C)
    Genre : Narrative Essay
    Essay Title : MY TRIP TO PAMUTUSAN ISLAND WITH MY BEST FRIENDS

    When I was to Pamutusan Island, I had sweet moments with my friends. There is nothing we could to forget. Beside first time we experience go to island. On our trip we got some difficulty. Because to arrived in pamutusan island we must past many hindrance.
    After that, that was my first time I was scare to go to island by boat. I feel afraid, but my friends say to me, I must be brave and think positive. When we at the boat i and my friends took some pictures on the boat, that is amazing moments when we go to pamutusan island. I am so very afraid cause i scared the boat sunk down to the water. We sang a song on the boat together and made a guess game on the boat, that is so very happiness moment on the boat. The interesting from island we past to arrived pamutusan island, we enjoy the trip. because that on the way is not boring, But we get many experiences. Such as the sea has blue water and green mountain we past to arrived in pamutusan island.
    When we arrived in pamutusan island we got the beautiful view and we saw the foreigner in lying on the white sand on the beach. Pamutusan island has beauty sand and the shining and blue water, and also coral reefs is very interesting. In there my friends is swimming and snorkeling. But I not joint with them, because I can not to swim, my friends said to me the coral reefs is very beautiful object. And they said the fish on the sea are very colorful and also manykinds of fish at there, i am very jealous with my friends cause they can swim as well not as like me. But I also enjoy with collecting reefs to I was brought and as mark we have arrived pamutusan island, and I never forgot to take the pictures in pamutusan island. At there very much a nice view that we never seen at the other places. After that we ate some foods which we bring from dormitory. Then we got a relax time for the last time on the pamutusan island, such as we took some picture, collect the coral reefs, and make a video as memories. Next, we went to home at afternoon, when we wanted to go the foreigner said goodbye to us as have visited the pamutusan island. And we throught the pasumpahan island, at there i see the others foreigner. And then we through the Suwarnadwipa Island.
    In conclusion, arrived pamutusan island give us many interesting experiences. Because from on the way until we arrived pamutusan island we feel nothing different other. We can know some beautiful island in padang.

  48. Name : Melia
    NPM : 14040081 (2014 C)
    Genre : Descriptive Essay
    Essay Title : BAD EFFECT OF SMOKE

    The smoke is problem that so dangerous and create many negative effect of this accident. Already more than one hundred days several regions in Indonesia full in smoke. Some ofprovinces in Indonesia such as Sumatera, Sulawesi and Kalimantanthere is smoke. The smoke came from burning forest by long drought in Indonesia in early 2015. The burning forest and the next result the smoke become so dangerous to us.

    The first, the smoke problem is so dangerous to health. The disease that came of smoke is ISPA. The ISPA is disease of the respiratory system. The effect of smoke problem is out of breath and we also felling sick in the eye. The smoke problem not only interfere with our health, but this is so dangerous because in several provincial in Indonesia the smoke is very thick and the smoke have made a baby died because the smoke. And until now, in October 2015 the solution of this problem has not been found.

    Second, the smoke is problem also give an uncomfortable feeling in driving. Because the smoke is makes our eyes in drive. Therefore driving in this weather situation is very dangerous. And the region is very thick smoke in Jambi is the source of fires. How much longer we will breathe this bad air? .The problem of smoke happen every year but only in 2015 is the solution of a very long disaster.

    Third, the smoke is not only dangerous to health and harmful smoke in driving, but also influence for our economic system. For example, the farmers can not getting good result. Fruit and vegetables are not good and fresh because the air not health and if the continued effect on the lives of farmer.

    In conclusion, the smoke result many negative effect and the problem every years that occurred in our country. The smoke problem result dangerous our health, give an uncomfortable feeling in driving and also influence for our economic system.

  49. Name : Bertha Nisaa Ulkhaeir
    NPM : 14040074 (2014 C)
    Genre : Narrative Essay
    Essay Title : VISITING JAKARTA

    There were so many places to see in Jakarta that my cousin decided to join the tours to see as much as possible. My cousin stayed in Kalideres on arrival. The first on was to Ragunan Zoo, the second was to Kota Tua, and the last dinner at a restaurant. On the day of the tour, we was ready.
    First, I and my cousin went to Ragunan’s Zoo. In the Ragunan’s Zoo there are hundreds of kinds of animals such as; Snakes, Monkeys, Elephants, Birds, and other. At there we tried to give the animal a food that we bring, but the keeper of zoo give us a warning note, cause there is not to give an animal a food. After that, we sat down and have lunch. I and my cousin ate a home made foods. Then we went to a 3D Cinema in the Ragunan’s Zoo, at there we watched about Animal’s Film that telling about the Primates film.
    The second tour to Kota Tua was a very different tour. Kota Tua like a Pondok street in Padang city. There are many old Dutch houses and there is a museum Fatahilah, we visited the museum and took some pictures for a memories that we have ever visited Museum Fatahilah. And the funny moments at the museum fatahilah my cousin slipped down cause the foor was wet, i can not to hold my laught cause he was very funny when he was slipping down at the floor. After that, the day had been night, my cousin said Kota Tua is very beautiful at night, there was very bright in the museum fatahilah cause the light was shining the building and we waited until the parade event was starting, cause i wanted to see the nusantara’s dance in the front of the museum fatahilah. That was so amazed parade that i have ever seen.
    The last we stopped at a restaurant for got dinner. I order my favorite food that is a grilled manado chicken, i very like the service in that’s restaurant, the service on the restaurant was very neat and very on time for the order, and my cousin order the aceh soup, i tried to tasted my cousin’s soup. It has a delicious tasted, there was a beef on the soup. Then, we went to home and rest because of fatigue a day of touring in Jakarta.
    Over all, i am very enjoyed the touring in Jakarta, and at there is very much a nice place at the Jakarta, and i had to get the much experiences after went at there. I really hope i can go there again.

  50. Name : Mahyu Nur Jannah
    NPM :14040100
    Sesi :2014 C
    Essay Title: Smog Haze Riau

    Fires and haze in Riau has disrupted people’s lives. Losses due to fires and haze estimated billions of rupiah. The loss from the environmental damage, inhibition of economic activity, to the disruption of the health of citizens. The impact of the health sector is simply a person develops respiratory disease, shortness of breath, irritation of the eyes and skin and the various diseases caused by this smoke. By fire, thousands of hectares of forest and degraded lands. Animals that inhabit the area burnt was also threatened with death. In the economic field, the smog has disrupted flight schedules.
    Indonesian society must face a prolonged haze that has blanketed several cities. Drought make smog worse. As a result, some schools were forced to be closed in order to maintain the health of the students. Not only is it too thick smoke began to invade the respiratory tract of infants and children
    In response to this supposed problem mist smog many things that can be done by Indonesia and other countries to address the problem of forest fires. In the short term, the government used the artificial rain, blackouts from the air and on land. A number of aircraft were sent to extinguish forest and land fires in Riau, South Sumatra, West Kalimantan, Central Kalimantan, South Kalimantan and Jambi.
    President assigned the TNI Commander helps exert additional effort military aircraft and personnel. For relevant ministries and institutions, the President asked to concentrate and mobilize the working program of government to the provinces affected. However, suppression of air can not be done during the flight also disrupted due to smog. Artificial rain also can not be done because there is no potential rain clouds.
    Although the haze condition has been categorized as an emergency, but only local governments are entitled to set the region entered the smoke emergencies. However, a number of provinces still define the area of disaster preparedness smoke, yet smoke emergency response such as in Riau and West Kalimantan.

  51. Name : Elia Roza Fransiska
    NPM : 14040175 (2014 C)
    Genre : Narrative Essay
    Essay Title : Sweet Vacation Moments with My College Friends

    When I was being a fresh student in college STKIP PGRI SUMBAR, I am so much to be happy meet new friends. I met them when the SIMAK event was begining as a opened the New students in STKIP PGRI West Sumatera. At that moments i Met with Monic and Sara, they are my first friends in STKIP PGRI. And then after SIMAK event has finished i and monic was on the one class in the C Session. And i know some a friends in the C session and make a friendship with some of them on the C session.

    The beginning of first semester I and my friends on vacation air maniss beach, only on vacation there was also another friends of his looking for a tourist to be interviewed, already walking path around the tourist beaches to be interviewed is hard to find for me and the other end to get a tourist named Toms ,Toms finally willing to be interviewed me and other friends laughing together with Toms, Toms a very good person. I am very happy to be acquainted with Toms. Finally finished my task and my friends looking for a place to relax, and there was also conducting to play and took pictures at the beach photos, finally it was afternoon when my friends to prepare to go home.

    Next holiday I and my friends Nandi, Monic, Rino, Endah, and Arul visit puncak mandeh, and Batu Kalang beach .We start the trip at 10.00 am went to puncak mandeh on the way to the destination, we feel so close together that we were joking laughter waive any load. Finally arriving in puncak mandeh we harness beauty mandeh to took a pictures with and removing laughter finished from puncak mandeh, we went to Batu Kalang beach arriving there we take a pictures to used moment at batu kalang beach ,and then we continued to walk around the batu kalang beach ,many people who vacation there, because the beauty of the beach and a row of large stones that make this beach into a tourist attraction in like many people. Finished from puncak mandeh and batu kalang beach we continue trip Rino house to have a rest. Finally finished Rino house we while heading home because tomorrow we start for lectures.

    Over all, since i study in STKIP i had much sweet moments. i feel happy even though I have been a student a lot of sweet memories that i had with my friends started vacation together Vacation to the air manis beach, puncak mandeh, and batu kalang beach really sweet moments with my friends in the campus .

  52. Name : Endah wulandari
    NPM : 14040087 (2014 C)
    Genre : Narrative Essay
    Essay Title : My Sweet Moments With My Friends in The Organization

    I have sweet moments when I was followed the organization since I learned in Junior High School until I learned in the college. At there I was followed organization in Junior High School 10 padang, next I was followed in Organisasi siswa Intra Sekolah ( OSIS ) in Nusatama Hight School, and than, I followed Himpunan Mahasiswa English Student Association ( ESA ) in STKIP PGRI West Sumatera.

    First, When I was in the Organization when I learned in Junior high School 10 Padang. At there I and my friends following social even at school such as college the money for another friends whom have a problem, for example : one of the family pass away, have the illness and many other. When I collect the data I have the humble friends they are name Nisa, Aldi, Steven and Putri. Nisa is beautiful and friendly but she is not smart, and not same as Putri, Putri smart and beautiful. Aldi and Steven are funny boy can make laugh and they are so weird.

    Second, When I was learned in Nusatama Hight School I followed the Organisasi Siswa Intra Sekolah ( OSIS ). At the time I was be Miss Nusatama and the best student of school. As long I learned in there I have best friends they are Meri, Devi, and Deny. Meri and Devi so funny and cute but Deny so calm and not many talk. Deny is cool, smart, friendly and handsome.

    And the last, When I was learned in STKIP PGRI West Sumatra in the third semester I following the organization Himpunan Mahasiswa English Student Association ( ESA ). At the time the big even is SIMAK ( Silaturahmi mahaiswa Keguruan ). I and my friends, Monic, Nandi,Rino feel so happy because in there we laugh together every day. And than we get two goblet of event. Beside it, we feeling tired because every day meeting and it is so bored, but it is make me understand about organization.

    In conclusion, I have sweet moments when I was followed the organization since I learned Junior Hight School until I learned in the college. I feel so happy ang can get many experience and knowledge about otganization.

  53. Name: Artika Rahmah
    NPM: 14040104 (2014C)
    Essay Title: The Tragedy of October

    The Tragedy of October

    On 14th October 2015, my friend and I experience tragedy which so surprised. We not never guess will experience that bad experience.

    It starts when my friend and I went to Pasaraya Padang on 14th October 2015. We leaving at 03.00 pm from the house. We went drive a motorcycle. When arriving in the market, we park the motorcycle in front of the Rocky Plaza.
    From Rocky Plaza, we walked in Pasaraya Padang heading Pasaraya Barat that not far from Rocky Plaza. While heading Pasaraya Barat, we fun looked load on shoulder of salesman there. We looks there are salesman sell masks. My friend and I bid the mask. Long enough, but cancel, because the price less match. We pass.
    We continiou the trip again. When arrive in Pasaraya Barat, suddenly my friend say to me with anxious. “My handphone taken by that person!.” She said while appoint a man who walked haste. I very surprised and direct chase the pickpocket. I pull his shirt. But he direct angry to me, even though I not yet say anything to him. “Do not accuse people carelessly” he said to me and my friend. From there it very clear, that he doer. “See, I do not have your Handphone, right?” he said again while lift his shirt to up and expend the contents of his pocket. Truly nothing. We are become confused how to prove it. Even though my friend conscious when she stolen. But we can not to prove it because the handphone truly nothing him. Who knows how the handphone had nothing to him. We still be able to debate with that pickpocket a moment ago. But the result naught.
    Finally, we was back home with disappointment, cause can not get the handphone. We was really regret at the accident.

  54. Name : Monica Jeli Utami
    NPM : 14040088 (2014 C)
    Genre : Persuassive Essay
    Essay Title : MENTAWAI ISLAND

    Mentawai island is one of all famous place that there in West Sumatera. All people that live in West Sumatera especially in Padang city know about mentawai island. In mentawai island; we can see a lot of good view that around of beach and mountain range, the high wave, and we also will find the specific food that famous in mentawai.

    First, mentawai island surrounded by the sea and mountain range. As we know, if the place surrounded by the sea of course the view that can we see is very good and make we are eyes and mind be fresh. But that is just obtain for people that like sea. If you likes sea and you visit the mentawai island especially with someone that you love, you can take a photo with good view and make romance situation. In mentawai island we also can feel the fresh air. Why??? Because it far from the big city, therefore the air in there still fresh and including contaminated.

    Next, not only a good view that there in mentawai island, but in mentawai island also have a high wave. The wave in mentawai include in the higher wave in the world, there in third position. The high wave often come when April month and August month. This situation will use by the tourist for surfing and swimming on the sea. Because the mentawai island has the high wave and it make the tourist attracted to visit mentawai island. The tourist that come to mentawai island, they are stay in makaroni resort, and around makaroni resort also has a good view.

    The last, mentawai island also have a specific food. They are sago and taro crispy. Inhabitants in mentawai island use sago for the first food, they are eat it with fish or pig. Because the majority that lives in mentawai island not just muslim, but also there except muslim, such as christian and catholic. Why I knows that?? Because I have a friends that live in mentawai island, and they are tell me more about that. Therefore if you are visit the mentawai island you have to find taro crispy that originate by taro’s plants and be food matter in mentawai island especially in Tua Pejat.

    In conclusion, mentawai island is a famous place with a good view, the high wave, and also with specific food for example; sago and taro crispy that there in mentawai island. Thus, if you are visit the mentawai island you will not disappointed, but you will so happy and you will not forget it.

  55. Name : Novi yolanda chania
    NPM : 12040126
    Essay title :Education And Learning English

    Education and Learning english in the days most important between another learning . I sad that because education make the one thing good for the knowledge. Education is one of way of to get good science about Iesson making us know with the Iesson. education also give best in the field of education , importance for us to get good educations to have a good future.
    one of education which must study is english language. English language to learn about foreign Ianguage have been in every school. benefit study of english learning is understanding of language, understand with the Iesson concept and able to speak english well. we never like original people of Ianguage english because we are not the same with us.
    In this time education of english language become important matter in education world and external world, because cleverly have good english language we can talk to with goodness in communicating in the field of work. the constraint we has in studying of english language is the lack of enthusiasm and intention in learning. not only perforced to do this case same when I in junior high school, no seriously only to consider the Iesson of english language as uninterasting.
    Now when I learninng english in university. I get something new about english learnin. getting Iesson which I can comprehend with concept and way of different than previously more easier and got better the Iesson to be comprehended. english learning more focused by the study. no intention to romp and understand with the lesson give the lecture to students.
    university have to provide more again medium to develop of students ability have english Ianguage to better . adding of students ability by giving Iesson with method which is easy to be comprehended and students understood. because university is place get science where higher level science can be obtained is better. important of have education and learn english language in this time very big its impact to the rising generation in this time, especially in era globalization, in this time claiming smart us to be more clever and education science, so that thinking to get the education better until higher level of education.

  56. Name : Sukma Fajarista
    NPM : 14040099 (2014 C)
    Genre : Persuassive Essay
    Essay Title : HOW IMPORTANT LEARN ENGLISH

    Why we have to learn English? As far as we know English is international language, that is use as communication among countries in the world. We can see the world by mastering English in speaking listening reading and writing. Beside that, there are many programs with English, for example like internet. We cant’t follow era globalization if we don’t have English well. There are some reasons why we have to learn English seriously.

    First, like the writer said before, English is international language. If we want to go to the hall of fame, we must be a master of English. Maybe for this time that’s not too important, but for our future, will be very important. Example, for continue our study to another country or for looking a job in U.S’s or U.S.A’s company. It needs our English score like TOEFL or TOEIC, and if our English not too clear, how we can get that minimum score.
    Next reason is because English is always using by the speaker in international meeting. If people from another countries are come together, usually they used English for their communication. So, if someday we come to one of that meeting, we must to used English too however our English not too clear.

    Next English is important because English is science language. We can be an excellent scientific if we have English well. Why? Lets we see in science dictionary, they named their formula and their idioms by English, so we must be a master of English before we be a master on science.
    The last but not least is because English used in big international movie production like Hollywood. When we learned English seriously and we have many vocabularies, we can watch the Hollywood’s movies without subtitle plus we can get what that movies means and that is very amazed.

    Over All, we have to learned English in seriously. Without good English, we can not to follow this era globalization, we can not to make our dreams happened to continue our study in another country, and that’s will be hard to join in international company without English well. Learned English not just for this time, not just for now but it will be useful in our future life.

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  57. Name : Irvan Haiko Rasaki
    NPM : 14040080 (2014 C)
    Genre : Descriptive Essay
    Essay Title :MOST BAD EFFECT FROM MODERN TECHNOLOGY FOR THE NEXT GENERATIONS

    As we knew in this era has created some modern technologies which can help the human’s work and it changes the civilizations of human folk. But, not all of it can be a positive effect for human. In the half of the country in the world could manage the technologies as well, such as Germany, China, and Japan which one of the advance country has a best develop technology in the world. Some of countries could not manage technology as well. Sometimes, the technologies should we solve as smartest because not every time it could be a good friends, one day the technologies could be a dangerous enemy and it could be an treatment for human folk.

    Firstly, although the technologies have a benefit for human folk the most important thing that we should give an attention more about technology for children. At this time, a technology is not just an adult as users, but for now kids and students also using a technology. Some of kids could be hypnotized with “Game” in the technology’s facilities. And that is the reason why the children be a rebel to their parents, be a lazier for do their homework’s, they do not just be a lazier for do their homework but they also could be lazy to do all of their activities in their habit. Then they could leave their obligation as students. And if the kids have addicted with the technology’s facilities (Game) the diseases very easier for attack the kids, not just the kids sometimes teenagers and adults also could get the diseases, like eyesight could be hazy cause very long to observe intently the computer or gadget. And then the insomnia also could attack the kids or adults.

    Secondly, the technology in a transportation which have a big influences for human’s healthy life. However transportation could help human folk for move from one place to other place. But, transportation makes humans being lazy for healthy life, whether we looked to the past time much human have a long time for alive and not much of them have a disease. But, when technology in transportation has developed much of the humans have attacked disease or cancer cause some of them inhale the fumes from transportation as excessive in everyday in a big city and the other effect from transportation could dilute a panel of ozone and it could be a global warming cause the fumes from transportation which be product in everyday. And sometimes transportation also causes an accident in the road and it increases the victim’s amount killed by car crush, much of the car crush victim’s case is the teenagers. And the other case of teenager is mischief of teenager on the street, such as reckless motorcycle, criminality on the street, and other case which the doer is a teenager. What the next generations will be if what they do always harm the other people?

    Thirdly, communication is also including to technology’s development. In the past time, communication still using a letter or mail for gives an information and delivery something to other people. In this era get an information and delivery something very easier for now. But, have you ever thought communication or communication service has much worst things especially on the social media. Lately, most of the problem on the reality life come from abusing of social media, such as criminality of deception for online shop and deception on the Short Message Service (SMS) who admit as your family which needing your help for send money to the person who pretend as your fake “Mom” and your fake “Dad”, then kidnapping a teenager from the acquaintanceship a new friends in the social media, cyber bullying which emphasized other people as mocked down somebody without stop in everyday or gives a bad name for the victims on the social media until the victims feeling stress and sometimes the victims of cyber bullying could give up for alive.

    In conclusion, the technology in this era brings some changes to the civilizations of human folk and it helps the human’s work, although it helps the human but not all of the effect of technologies could give a positive things for people, most of the bad effect from technology is the humans are trained be a lazier by technology for do something or do their activity as intensively, and that is why the human quality is very low especially for the next generations.

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  58. Name : Nefri Nandi
    NPM : 14040092 (2014 C)
    Genre : Descriptive Essay
    Essay Title : THE PROFESSIONAL TEACHER IN THE MIDDLE SCHOOL 14 PADANG

    Professional teacher is a good teacher where she or he can transfer many knowledge to the students, and a teacher can comprehend the material before the material give to the students. And then not only about it, the professional teacher can be answer the all question from they are students.
    The professional teacher’s can explain same material with clear and be able make the fun situation for study in the classroom and can be calm. For example, went I was studied in senior high school 14 Padang, my teacher only sit in the classroom after that, my teacher said to they are student’s “ ok, class open your books page thirtieth, and your make exercise one until exercise seven “, we are not understand about material because my teacher not explain the material to student’s in the classroom.
    It is my experience and I am describe a professional teacher, because the world education’s specifically for Indonesian need the professional teacher for development education. Next, if you are wannabe a teacher but you not have ability with your programs study, what are you will transfer to your student’s, actually a teacher must have much knowledge and the professional teacher able to use the technology for support your material in the classroom.
    The professional teacher’s is the teacher can understand with the student’s, teacher is profession not only teach some material in the classroom, but a teacher can educate the morality and attitude a student’s in the classroom. A teacher can take the position in the classroom like as a teacher and sometimes a teacher can take the position look as an old fellow.
    The conclusion the professional teachers is a teacher can be good example to they are student, and a teacher can good teach the difficult material to be easy material, don’t make your students feel confused with your material, we are new generation or candidate of teacher in the future. and then we are must be the professional teacher after graduated from STKIP PGRI West Sumatra.

  59. Name : Rika Astria
    NPM : 14040090 / 2014 C
    Genre : Narrative Essay
    Essay Title : STORY OF MY LIFE IN MY FAMILY

    In a lovely village with a towering mountains that lie, in accordance with the chirping of birds melodious add a calm and peaceful with the cool air in the morning. Each of which passes through the village will get special effects because the village is situated between the mountain and the mountain. Yes that’s my village atmosphere which is not far from the town of Bukittinggi and Padang Panjang exact name Koto Baru village, district. X Koto district. Tanah Datar.

    In the village that’s life a happy married couple. They met because of their simplicity. Despite their different tribes but their lives remain peaceful. Although the character of the father of a little indifferent, but he was a good father and wise in the family. They complement each other live with love and understand each other and complement each other.

    A husband and wife who live happily it is both my parents named my father Syafril is dead and my mother Suryati. My father’s original inhabitants of the village live now while my mother transmigration of the Park. My dad is a loving person but also a little subdued. While my mother was the biggest I’ve ever met with sacrifice and love for her family.

    After several years of marriage recognized by both parents of three children. First red by named Rico Satria now 28-year old self-employed work and his status is not married. Both my sister called Rike Astria is now aged 25 and married status since October 25, 2013, and with her husband named Doni Afrianto and have children, they are my nephew Aqilla Rikzatunnisa. I was the last child of three brothers, named by Rika Astria born in Padang Panjang on 26 December 1994, now 20 years old and am studying at STKIP PGRI West Sumatera.

    Now I live with my mother, brother, sister, brother-in-law and my nephew. My father is dead since three years and eight months ago, precisely on February 20, 2012. My dad died of complications from lung disease and heart and has three times out of the hospital at that time, but God willed otherwise my father who I love so fast to leave by the time I was in second grade school.

    When my father passed away and left his entire family in conditions that are unacceptable for the departure of the father. I and other members of their families by trying to remain patient and willing father’s departure. I was so sad and devastated because of a father’s pride has left me forever. But I’m sure dad is always there beside me, and I always read a prayer in every remembered father.

    Now it’s time I got to change my life and my family happy with studious and diligent help of my mother. This time the mother is the backbone of the family. Mom worked as a farmer and trade which sometimes get results from his work once in four months. Here, even without the presence of their parents are trying to build a harmonious and happy family. So according to my mother’s unsung heroes who sacrifice, meritorious, and care by selflessly with love that it provides.

    The overall conclusion is that we as children should always be submissive, obedient, hardworking and loved his family, especially to the parents of our parents because we care for and raise us from childhood until now. I had as a child of both parents by which my father had died and my mom would make her happy and I return the favor to the mother and other family especially for the father who is in heaven. Thank you mom and dad for the love and affection you .. 

  60. Name: Abdi Juwan
    NPM : 12040189
    Essay Title : Education Language Is Art

    When the young people who have studied in school and consider themselves too high and smart to merge with the people who work with picks and only have a modest ideals, then better education is not provided at all
    yan said it was tan Malacca in his book entitled Madilog. is not education that teaches pride to muridnya.karna education is an art that is free and education friendly itself comes from the Greek word meaning lead her children. in Indonesia there are some figures that upholds that education is the most important thing in life. one of them is of Ki Hajar Dewantara with the slogan “tut wuri Handayani” which means Tut Wuri: follow from behind and handayani means giving moral support or encouragement.

    moved from the era of contemporary education is not considered important, many parents do not send their children on the grounds that money can buy everything. so even though a child has never been to school, but when he has his money will still be delicious even without education. one of the lessons in the world of education is learning English. as we know it today English is the language that is needed to welcome the free market. not only that, to learn the English language we know as an international language would not hurt us as Indonesia that as a developing country for its study. so we can help Indonesia in its development period. John F Kennedy once said, ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country. let’s think about what we’ve done for our country

    there is nothing wrong with learning the language and life of other countries other Malak quote Tan said, Learn from the West, but do not be a copycat West, but be a smart student from the East. This citation teaches many things, one of the study to the west so that we are not fooled and colonized Indonesia AGAIN .berbicara of the state would not be separated from youth or student owned a country. the progress or regress of a country will depend heavily on the creation and the art of young people. it summed up clearly as a function of youth as agents of change. speaking young people would not be separated from students who are regarded as the gold of his nation. according to the author students need to learn English as an international language. because as was said above the first row of the youth was to keep the country from colonialism.

    in education for students should not only students taking the concentration of English who learn English. because as mentioned above the English language is very useful for all the affairs of the world. human beings as essentially as individual and social beings in desperate need of communication. with the English language we know as the international language of a man certainly can communicate broadly and globally. by being able to communicate globally, every business and needs required would be much easier. either in the world or relations and other jobs.

    Language is an art that is often ignored by most people. a lot of people do not want to learn the language, both its own native language or languages which are considered foreign. education itself is one of the most ignored by many people. whereas education is an art that teaches about the world. but a great education there would be no use if it is not applied and practiced. as was narrated from Jabir, Rasullah Shallallahualaihiwassalam said: “And the best of men are the most helpful to other humans”

  61. Name: Restu Sandra Sundami
    NPM : 14040114
    Essay Title : Education is Important Thing

    Education is a process, some process to help us to being a good person in our life. Education will shape the character of the human to be good or bad and they will knows to do something bad or good for them. As we know English is international language so we must to learn it. There are many reason English edication is important thing.

    First, English is the key communication in the world. Most of the country in the world learning the English language became important subjects in school. For example in our contry that is Indonesia, In fact the student start studied english from elementary school until senior high shcool even in a college. Now that we know this is a globalitation area, English can help us to communication with other people from another place in the world.

    Then English can make us to easy get a job. For instance, now I studied at English education department STKIP PGRI in west sumatera. After I graduate from this college I can get a job not as a teacher but also I can to get job as translator, bank employess or office employess. On the other hand you can open private lesson if you have a free time. So you can share your knowledge and get some money.

    My Expextations toward English learning in University is the student must seriously to learning English and use English language in their life, that can make English language is not hard to understand . Therefore student will be the good English speakers and make Indonesia proud have a great student can speak English because English is the international language.

  62. Name : Daramaya Asria
    NIM : 14040133
    Essay Title : English is Important Thing For Our Life

    If we hear about english, we will think that english is the prominent language in this world. English is called international language because almost all of country use it. In every moment all of human that have different state if they meet, they will use english as language liaison between them. Example if the leaders of state meet in a conference,they will use english in their discuss. Therefore, we need to get that skill from Education and learning english. Education and learning english are one of the important point in order we can competent in this subject. And than, english have to be learnt by community in every state because it had been an international language.
    English is a important thing with students future. Thus, In Indonesian, education and learning english had been almost applied in degree of school, such as junior high school, senior high school, university that studied specific subject what we want, and there are various courses to study english. The purpose is, to prepared students to get the better future. For instance, a sudent can continue his study to foreign country if he has a skill in english, he has to have a good value of TOEFL, not just it, he must have a skill in good speak english, because when he get go to the next step, it is interview, he must use english in answer all of qustion from juries.
    English is also important for them that want to find occupation. English will be an added value for them. For example when they follow a test to get a occupation in a company, they can use their english skill in every steps, such as in writing test, interview test, or talents test. And also, english can be made to improving career for they who have been a occupation. For example the people that work in an international company, they will always using english in communicated with their client. And if they do it well, they can be promoted to a high position in that company. For they that want to improve or want to study english but they have been had work everyday, they can get a english course or can study by way of online in internet.
    Education and learnings english help us in everything. And we can do it if we study and have a good teacher in this subject. Then, I have a expectation for my lecture where I study now. I hope the property that we need in study english can be completed. Its purpose is in order that the process of study will be success. Such as the properties in labor, it can be completed with recording and the things that had been broke can buy again.
    From all of my explain above, we know that english is important thing for our life. Start from purpose of our study englis in school, it is important for our job, and we need facilities to study well in our university. Finally, english is not our mother-language, nut we have to know that by way of study taht subject, and it needs practice everyday in order we can get skill in english subject well. I think, that is statements about education and learning english. Keep study hard.

  63. Name: Salbiah
    Npm:14040082 (2014 c)
    Genre: Narrative essay

    Moments in senior high school

    When i was senior high school, many moments that i got. Moments during was senior high school i pass with my bestfriends, which those moments are, embarassment, funny, and impress. Those moments are, was punished because did not lohor pray, cooked fried noodle, and holiday to Kandi in Sawah Lunto.
    The first, moment that very embarassment during was senior high school is when i and my bestfriends were punished by our religion teacher, because did not lohor pray as together at the mosque. We hid at the another class in order our teacher can not find us. But, eventhough we did that our teacher found us, because one of our classmate knew that we hid at another class and he told to teacher of religion about it. Then the teacher came to class where we hid and suddenly opened the door. We were very startled. I and my bestfriends were each amazed, embarassed, and would to run, but we can not do anything. Because of our action that did not pray, we were punished by squat walked star from class we hid until to middle of square. After arrived at the square, we were punished again by faced to flag in the middle of the sun heat. I and my bestfriends were really embarassed, because many other students that looked and laughed to us.
    Then moment that i think funny when was senior high school is when cooked fried noodle at home one of my bestfriend. As cooky to cook noodle is me, meanwhile my bestfriends prepared materials. After that, i began to cook noodle. My bestfriends took note to me that was cooking. About 15 minutes fried noodle was already. We ate that as together. In the middle we ate fried noodle, one of my bestfriends is Eva cried, because of spiced. Indeed that fried noodle many chili and pepper. Her tears was out, face and her lips were red. She was speechless, because spiced. We that saw her expression laughed ,because it was funny.
    The last moment that i think impress when was senior high school is when our class holiday to Kandi in Sawah Lunto.We arrived there at 05.30 am and the air was cold. We were not out from the car until the sun rose. About at 08.00 am we entered to Kandi. There we looked many animal such as, elephants,tigers,snacks,and butterflies’s methamorfhosis. After that, my bestfriends asked me went to game area was flying fox. The first time looked flying fox i was very afraid to try that. My body was tremble and the sweat was out. But, due to wanted to feel adventure of flying fox i was encourage my self. When was my body was pushed by keeper of flying fox through the rope it was very horrified, because in the under there is river. I had time scream, because of afraid to fall eventhough used safeguard. Eventhough it was horrified, i think it was moment that pleasent and also impress.
    Those all are my moments when i was senior high school. Moment that embrassed, funny, pleasent and also impress. Those moment never ever i forget, because those very interesting for me. Those moments gave me many learning. If sometimes i remember those make me laugh alone. Moment when was senior high school indeed moment that very interesting.

  64. Name :Reka saputri
    Npm :14040109
    Title :
    The importance of education and learning the English language

    we all must have known that the importance of education for a person. With the education one can have the knowledge, ability is high. These things into one that can be a valuable asset we have for our future and helping people.

    Education is very important because to enter the working world, we must have the expertise, of course, the expertise that we have that we get in the education that we’ve been through, with the expertise that we have we will be easily accepted in a company that we dream. For instance expertise in English, English very necessary if we are to enter the workforce international scale, if we can not speak English then we would not be acceptable in the international company.

    English is the most popular language, the English language is very important because for example in Indonesian will open global markets will certainly be a lot of foreign companies that will go to Indonesia, therefore we must master the English language if you do not want to miss time.

    We all expect, in studying English at the university must use effective ways, for example in the study of translation can be by showing video clips that speak English, then translated into Indonesian.

    In conclusion, education is very important, to enter the world of work, and to acquire knowledge. English is very important to work in international companies .And learn English in an interesting manner will facilitate us in learning the English language.

  65. Name : Rori Eliza Risman
    NPM : 14040120
    Essay title : Advantages Of English For The Future

    English is an international language that serves as a unifier of the nation.We learn the English language from elementary to university but many people are not concerned with learning the English language and considers unimportant,without we realize many benefits of learning english.
    The first, advantage of the english can be easy to get job.
    For example, if we want to be flight attendent we must can speak english. Because,
    The passenger of the airplane from various parts of the world .
    The second, advantage of the English can expedite communiation in bussines. For example, if we are a businessman , joined by a large foreign company ‘ we must have good English language skills.
    The third, advantage english can be easier for us to solve the job .
    For example , can we see almost communication and information tools that we use well in house or in office use english language.
    In conclusion, language english is very advantage for our the future.

    Expextations towards english learning in university is able to pass the younger generation which has the ability to speak English is good and true , in grammar and pronunciation.

  66. NAME : OKTA PUTRI ARIANTIKA
    NIM : 14040128
    TITLE : The important of english education

    Nowdays , english is being an international language. Most of everyone using english as speaking habit in their around like , society , environment, office , school and college. besides, english is being one of leasson which is important to all of people in the world, not only to advance country where is able being english as their speaking habit but another country that still is being develop have to learn english well, therefore the people should knowing deeply about the important of english education everywhere.

    The first important of english education, It is language of world. Each country using english to socialization between another country in order to convey an intention, with using english the people who from different country can get clear delivery. For example, when we attend an international event. Most of people using english to speak with people who from different country and the host speak english too to get easy socialization between crowd person from another country.

    The second , English education can help all people who follow it to get work easily. Likes we know, english belong a criteria when we will apply for a job. most of company certain will hold an interview to speak english and interviewer will take a consider from it. Therefore all people must have skill to speak english fluently. Actually to students, in order to they have trained and have a good skill to prepare their self when they want to look for a job in future.

    The next, important of english education is Recognize of technology. It is mean technology using english too. For instance, most of people sometimes do not understand when they want to access a technology or have problems within, while all of technology use english to be accsesed and most of school and college have used technology as media to study.

    Overall, the people have to learn english deeply, It is can get a good influence. The important of english education because it is includes are English is language of world , easy to get a job and recognize technology and expectations toward learning english in university wiil be increased and created english is being daily ordinary language in order to train to speak up english and slowly english will be the one in speaking habit.

  67. Name : Vebi Yuliska
    NIM : 14040125
    Tittle : The Precious English

    I believe that every people who grew up in our beloved country, Indonesia,and got education from the beginning till in the university level have ever taught to go for holiday or continuing education, even to stay outside of Indonesia. But, how could it be if we can not speak in English? We can not talk even ask to anyone which direction to go back to the hotel if we got lost in other country such as Singapore. Because Indonesian people still placed English as foreign language and it makes us thinking that English is not really matter. Now, i am not going to talk about how to get A for an English test. I am going to talk about the precious level in our life after graduating from collage that is continuing our education and get a job.

    As a student, it is important to continue our education to a higher level. Because we should not feel satisfied with what we have got. As long as we master in English language, it is possible for us to be able to cotinue our education out of the country. It is unreasonable, but there are three things we can get when studiying outside the country. first, it will makes us more open-minded. Secondly, when we are away from home, it makes us understand the meaning of being together with family, the next one is to support us to get a job as we want. For instance, graduates aboard would be seen when applaying for a job than those who are not.

    English language must be mastered by anyone, because English is one of international language besides Arabic and French. If we have mastered English language, it can end up breaking a wall to get a job in foreign country. Because, the first important thing by having a work aboard is speaking and writing in English correctly. There are two different things if we got a work aboard rather than in Indonesia. Firstly, they will pay us as good as the work we did, as we know that Rupiah’s currency is very low toward Dollar and it would be better if we paid by Dollar to support our better life. Besides the salary is the experience, experience can not be bought, can only be obtained if we are comptent in the section. for example,being a teacher in foreign country will teach us to respect and learn about different cultures.

    English is science and technology. Many sources that we can read the book recently after being translated into indonesian. That is the importance we studied English in collage, we can direcly gain knowledge whithout any interpretation. I said technology because, the technology that we use today mostly using English. If we do not understand English, how do we use tehnology to teaching and learning process effectively? such as operating a computer .

    At the end, no matter we are english student or not but all of us must be good in English language. Because english can be one which support us to continue our education in foreign country. And it can help us to get job that we need because mastered in English mostly being one of the condition. Understand English can help us to use tehcnology. English is more than important to me because of three points that i have explain above.

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  68. Name : Chica Camelia
    Npm : 14040127

    Theme : What does education and learning English to you
    Topic : Education and learning English
    Tittle : English as key of the world

    English is not the only language in the world , there are many other languages . However , English is the international language . And we should be able to master English , because English is the key of the world .
    The first , English is the key of education, scientific, and technologi world.
    Many international schools that we encounter, and someone who wants to get to school is in demand to be able to master the English language . Besides, many university exchange students abroad , have good English language skills , the course can help students to communicate well.
    Second, English is key of occupational world . Not only beneficial to a student , the English language is also useful for someone who wants to find a job . Many company who needed someone fluent in English . for example, flight attendants , a banker.
    Third , English is key globalization world . English is indeed the key of world globalization , English is indeed key to the globalization of the world . because the Indonesian people should be able to compete with the global market that will occur in the future .
    In conclusion , English is needed , for example in the fields of education , scientific and technologi . And the key for someone to compete in a globalized world .

    And expectations towards English learning in University is be able to speak English nearly native speaker.

  69. NAME : Suci Rahmadina Putri
    NIM : 14040072
    Essay title : The smallest mistake can be so great that I’ve ever done

    I had some memory that I will never forget what makes me feel remorse because of its own negligence. I was do something the smallest mistake can be so great to make all of must responsible with do it.
    First,when i was senior high school,I try style joined some girls to short skirt and looked small clothes.Iwas called by the teacher and then sentenced to wrong some parts of the uniform used with red markers.Beside it I bear the shame, I had missed the lesson that followed when it
    Second,oneday i do not listen to advice parents, they are after warning to dont go to play with cycle together my friends,not long before I slip and fall so that makes my knees hurt,after treatment turned out to cause a trail that can not be eliminated, all of it be was so bad.
    Third then I put the phone under the head in a state of sleep.Iwas sad because phone is purchased broken glass and made the voice is not clear yet,though handphone was bought with money already in the tube.
    Next when I do’t care with any of study subjects are considered less important and sure get good result, but it turns out I was wrong alleged in the end my bad value and realized it was negligence, therefore I have to bear the risk for a repeat next year.
    Concluding a life lesson that I get able to bear the risk of what has been done,all the mistake it made me more appreciative, keeping something well and not neglecy all the tasks that should be done, not to delay the next day, all of it because the act it self is not others depend on us to control it.

  70. NAME : AZLINA
    NPM : 14040129
    TITLE : Characteristics of future teachers

    The challenges of being a teacher in the 21st century increasingly stringent. Especially for an English teacher, which he/she must have the characteristics and could take on a challenges to keep up with the others. So teachers can encounter global challenges.
    The first characteristic that must be have is soft-skills. If he/she has a good soft-skill would seem at the attitude of teacher, where influenced by the attitude of mindset. For example in confront a problem, and he/she can solve the problem properly.
    The second characteristic is able to communicate well. Communication is importance key in determining the success of the learning process. If teacher are able to communicate well, the ultimate goal of learning will be achieved.
    The third is able to utilize the media. Nowadays, the technology is more advanced, English teachers are expected to provide the material in a different way from the others. The variation in learning, such as the use of game-based learning media.
    The last characteristics is open-minded. By opening ourselves to see something that we have never seen before. Meant is opening up globally. Such as you have something to share like the way to learn a foreign language in another country.
    The tips and tricks that can be applied in learning.
    A future teacher who have a good attitude, can interact properly, can take advantage of existing technology and open-minded to the outside world is expected in education increasingly competitive especially for an English teacher who will not just be hanging out with Indonesian people but will join the wider world.

  71. NAME : OKTA PUTRI ARIANTIKA
    NIM : 14040128
    TITLE : The important of english education

    Nowdays , english is being an international language. Most of everyone using english as speaking habit in their around like , society , environment, office , school and college. besides, english is being one of leasson which is important to all of people in the world, not only to advance country where is able being english as their speaking habit but another country that still is being develop have to learn english well, therefore the people should knowing deeply about the important of english education everywhere.

    The first important of english education, It is language of world. Each country using english to socialization between another country in order to convey an intention, with using english the people who from different country can get clear delivery. For example, when we attend an international event. Most of people using english to speak with people who from different country and the host speak english too to get easy socialization between crowd person from another country.

    The second , English education can help all people who follow it to get work easily. Likes we know, english belong a criteria when we will apply for a job. most of company certain will hold an interview to speak english and interviewer will take a consider from it. Therefore all people must have skill to speak english fluently. Actually to students, in order to they have trained and have a good skill to prepare their self when they want to look for a job in future.

    The next, important of english education is Recognize of technology. It is mean technology using english too. For instance, most of people sometimes do not understand when they want to access a technology or have problems within, while all of technology use english to be accsesed and most of school and college have used technology as media to study.

    Overall, the people have to learn english deeply, It is can get a good influence. The important of english education because it is includes are English is language of world , easy to get a job and recognize technology and expectations toward learning english in university wiil be increased and created english is being daily ordinary language in order to train to speak up english and slowly english will be the one in speaking habit.

  72. Name : Vebi Yuliska
    nim : 14040125
    tittle : The Precious English

    I believe that every people who grew up in our beloved country, Indonesia,and got education from the beginning till in the university level have ever taught to go for holiday or continuing education, even to stay outside of Indonesia. But, how could it be if we can not speak in English? We can not talk even ask to anyone which direction to go back to the hotel if we got lost in other country such as Singapore. Because Indonesian people still placed English as foreign language and it makes us thinking that English is not really matter. Now, i am not going to talk about how to get A for an English test. I am going to talk about the precious level in our life after graduating from collage that is continuing our education and get a job.
    As a student, it is important to continue our education to a higher level. Because we should not feel satisfied with what we have got. As long as we master in English language, it is possible for us to be able to cotinue our education out of the country. It is unreasonable, but there are three things we can get when studiying outside the country. first, it will makes us more open-minded. Secondly, when we are away from home, it makes us understand the meaning of being together with family, the next one is to support us to get a job as we want. For instance, graduates aboard would be seen when applaying for a job than those who are not.
    English language must be mastered by anyone, because English is one of international language besides Arabic and French. If we have mastered English language, it can end up breaking a wall to get a job in foreign country. Because, the first important thing by having a work aboard is speaking and writing in English correctly. There are two different things if we got a work aboard rather than in Indonesia. Firstly, they will pay us as good as the work we did, as we know that Rupiah’s currency is very low toward Dollar and it would be better if we paid by Dollar to support our better life. Besides the salary is the experience, experience can not be bought, can only be obtained if we are comptent in the section. for example,being a teacher in foreign country will teach us to respect and learn about different cultures.
    English is science and technology. Many sources that we can read the book recently after being translated into indonesian. That is the importance we studied English in collage, we can direcly gain knowledge whithout any interpretation. I said technology because, the technology that we use today mostly using English. If we do not understand English, how do we use tehnology to teaching and learning process effectively? such as operating a computer .
    At the end, no matter we are english student or not but all of us must be good in English language. Because english can be one which support us to continue our education in foreign country. And it can help us to get job that we need because mastered in English mostly being one of the condition. Understand English can help us to use tehcnology. English is more than important to me because of three points that i have explain above.

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  73. Name : Aidil Suci Lukiah
    Nim : 14040131

    English education

    Education is a procces of giving knowledge from a person to another person. Education purpose is making the target understand and educated. English education is learning about english language and also as second language, specially in Indonesia. According to me, learning english is dificult because its not mother language of Indonesia.

    Talk about english education, it’s really important because it is an International language. International language means a language that is used by people around the world in communication purpose. Capable in speaking english means having special thing because many of tourist come to Indonesia for their own bussines.

    English education in university is one of study program. And each study program have a must in learning english. It has purpose for they can compete in work field with the people from another country. Morever, for they who study in physic and chemys subject.

    For physic student, it have abligation to understand and learning english because many of the expert books have used english and the method of research is more better than Indonesia.

    In conclusion, learning english is really needed by everyone for getting much information. In communication, its great to be learned so we can understand what english user said.

  74. Name: sinta yulia
    NPM : 14040140

    Theme : what does education and learning English to you
    Topic : education and learning english
    Tittlle : English ease us

    At this moment, study English is very needed. Start from children until adult want to speak in English.many people who join in courses and they pay many money to can English although they already adult, they keep study English.they should can English because many technology which used English , for get a job and to reading English books. English is important . before you do it you should know and learning English very well.
    Many technology which used English, every person certainly want to rely on many various of technology because technology is window of the world. We must can used technology although just a little. Then, if you want to get the good job, you should can English first.English used for interview or other . such us if you work in foreign companies, you should can English well and exact. Beside,every people should diligently read. If they reading they will know and you will read foreign books which dominant to English language . everywehere you go , you can reading.
    English language is very expensive to this periode. Who can English language smoothly is smart person. Because they will know about everything. Nothing loss to learning English. You should make English be second language to Indonesia like Malaysia and the other foreign.
    In coclusion, English help us in everything,consider English or belittle English language is wrong thing.technology, to get a good job and raed English books will be easy if you can English.

  75. Name: Khoiro Hasanah
    NPM: 11040274
    Entitle: Proud with My Mother spirit

    My mother is the best of my life. My mother born in 1966 at Langgar Payung, Sumut. Have six child. Namely, Rifi Yenreni, Khoiro Hasanah, Muhaira, Hanifa, Adzan Hatman, and Maqhfiroh Izanni. Since my father was died in 2012 My mother as a mercant in the market for fill our needed every day, until we can be at university lecture. Praise be to god. My mother battle itself for the sake of all of everybody.

    The oldest is Rifi Yenreni has married, work as Administration at a school and have two child. Then Myself still needed load and study in here/STKIP PGRI. Next, Muhaira study at UMTS North Sumatera, thus Hanifa study at STAIN Batu Sangkar, after that Adzan Hatman study 3rd grade of Junior High School, and youngest Maqhfiroh Izanni 1st grade of Junior High School.

    However, I proud of my mother that has been able send to school all of everybody. Although, sometimes heard kick because my mother merchandise spoiled who knows why and can not for sell again. Actually we don’t know what happened. When heard all of this I say stop study to my mother and I want to help my mother for work, However she never permit. she so angry to me. My mother said ‘ so, what the result my battle this while, if you stop? Keep studying, don’t also do think, that will do think about itself’. apparently, my spirit lose than my mother spirit.

    Finally, My mother is the best of my life, I’m very thanks to my mother that be able to give all of our needed. However thanks giving for Allah that has been given the power for my mother. Anything which happened, my mother keep trying provide the best.

  76. Name : Devi Surya Adini
    NIM : 14040093
    Essay title : For My Grandmother

    My grandmother is the best grandmother for me, sometime she can be bestfriend for me that listen all of my story and always make me laugh when I feel can not smile. All of her suggestion make me be calm and have finish my problem.
    When I child, my grandmother teach me to be a great girl. She teach me to can cooking, cleaning house, and to be autonomous. I still remember I always go to play with my friends when my grandmother asking me to wash dishes and cleaning house, I always make she dejected. But she never scold me, she just said “Devi,you must have responsibility in your life. You must accustomed do it in order to do not spoiled.
    After I adolescent, my grandmotherteach me to be careful with love, she said that love can paralyze me when I love person that wrong and if I make a fool of person who love me. Event love make me cry and down, it’s bring tears in her eyes. When I show her tears, I be strong to up and I want not see she cry again.
    Then, when I wan not to continue to study in university, my grandmother give me support. She said that she want to show me graduate by university and be success next time. As long she still life she will support me. But, now she was pass away and leave me here. Good bye my grandmother, I hope you get beautyful place in the heaven.
    Although my grandmother was pass away, I will always try to be a great girl like my grandmother’s hope. She always be there in my heart and still will be the best grandmother for me. I will be a great girl for my grandmother because I love her.

  77. NAME : DIAN WINA PUTRI
    NIM : 14040132

    ESSAY TITLE : Why Have To Get Education

    Education,what is on your mind if you hear this word ? yap, maybe you will imagine about school and university. For modern people education is very important. Without education someone will not be considered,why ? because education is a key to be success for us.
    For a little humans who is still thinking primitively,education is not problem that more important for them,the most important for them is family and how to get money easily without school.
    Education can change everything,for someone is not have much money,eduaction can rise it is family degree by education. For me education is very important,because education is a key to be success way,how to get success,actually is need process that not easy.
    Like me,i choose the way to get success with taken English Department in STKIP PGRI SUMBAR. Once again people ask me why i choose English ? is English foreign in our country ? English is Universal languange,or world langange. To communicate with people in the world,we have to learn English because of that i choose English Department.
    Choose English department it does not mean that we have to be a teacher of English. English is department which flexible because we can enter to a job another of teacher. It is like be a employee in a Bank,translator,employee in a office,and others. Nowadays,actually English is be needed.
    Education and English education is like a shoes,who walks next to each other and cannot to be separated. So we are so lucky to take this flexible department. I expactation to STKIP PGRI to increase and more fix the facilities that can rise our campus and not only university that ability to generate the best students but STKIP PGRI can bring out the students with more quality.

    • NAME : Listia Ayuning Putri
      NIM : 14040106

      Essay Title : EDUCATION AS A FUNCTION

      We need to get education because it is important in our life. Functions of education are to have knowledge, get more skills, also to bring us to be a good person. Education use to support us to have bright future. Who has extensive knowledge will has more big possibility to get success than who is not. One of many ways we can get education is like enter to a formal education, such as school as institution of education.Thereare reasons why i said that education is important.
      First, if we learn in a formal education like a school, we will be learned about many lessons that cannot find in other places. We can increase our skill and the teachers in the scholl will help us to know where our provits and our weaknesses. Then, we will find new situation on learning with the difference way also teach with friends and by a teacher. From that situation the teachers will teach how to interacting each other.
      Second, how important education for us, the answer is people whose get education will more thinking modernly and know how to comport oneself. A good person is not who has high education only, but anything that be teached in the school that can real by the students are the good person actually. The purpose we learn in the school is to have a ood soft skill that we can get from elementru school until senior high school. Even in the Unversity we can learn how to be grew up become adult. It is match with the function of education as a institution to form character of the students.
      Third, education is ability to be a standard for us to get a job because it towards us to determine our career in the future. The reason is, if we had been done our lecture, we will more easy to choose our job what we want. Besides, we have match what we able to do with what we want. It can we know in the school by the test that be held in the school.
      Then, when we had knew where our provit, we can continue our education in University. For instance,to take English Department. In this department, we hopes that we can learn deepest of International language. There is no loss if people in a country to do not learn English. Skill on speaking in foreign language can we advantage as a way to get a job in the future. As an International language English can be accepted in wherever we are. I am personality choose English with expecttion that English can bring me out to the better area in a job.
      In addition, all of us have to get education to bring out the good generate in the future. To be a good person and have a good soft skill we can get it in the shool as an institution of education. It is better if all of us in this world can get education. Education of English in Indonesia will gives many advantages because will be produced students who has high quality that able to speak in foreign language. Tht is of all, Functions of educayion will more can see and useful.

  78. NAME : LIZA HARTINA
    NIM : 14040107

    Essay Title : How Important Education

    Education is the most important thing. We can get it and progress in there. With education we can process develop ourself to perform our life. There are two kinds of education. It is formal education and non formal. Formal education can find in the school and university while nonformal education in home, environment and society.
    We need to get education because with learning we can get more knowledge. Education is a process to get success. In this modern education is being standard to search a job.
    Education is really important, both of english. English is more high from another languages because english become internasional language in the world. So we have to dominate english if want to know world.
    We choose English Department in STKIP PGRI SUMBAR because i think major was nice. Besides graduate english easy to get a job, not only as a teacher but also as a translator, bank employess and office employees.
    So education is the most important thing, because with learning we can develop self potential. Besides we need get education because with learning we can get more knowledge, as well as the english language. English is an international language. If someone expert of graduated english department then not only can work teacher, but also as the others. I hope for a good campus hopefully listening labor could be added again, to add more colection of english books and complementary facilities

  79. Nama :Indah Lestari
    NPM :14040116 / D
    TITLE : The Important Of Learning English Language
    Learning English mean learn foreign language.Learning English very important because english language is internasional language.The mean study english language for me is how to has good pronounciation when using english because in english language wrong pronounciation will wrong mean.How to write in grammatical also be good speaker and listener.
    Learning English language very important.In Globalisation era english language very needed.However,will there are human from foreign country.In work areas english language very need also be prerequirement to enter a company.If we have good english language ,sure we will easy to find a job that we want.On the other hand if we can not to use english language we will difficult to find a job because get reputed not competent.For example a employees has good english language will more competent and get good position.Moreover a employees can not using english language will get job like as cleaning service and other low position.
    In education english language we will learning how to using the correct english language.Learning english must started from our heart and self.Otherwise we will difficult to understanding about it,and must seriously in studying english language.Our skill to increase vocabulary will make easy to speak up in english.The key of be good speaker in english is must often practiced.And habit of using english language in daily activity.
    Learning english language is education my choose.I choosing it because Iwant to increase my skill in foreign language.However,if we have good skill in english we will easy to communication with human foreign and will easy to get a job.Further more company in indonesia more believe at skill human foreign.In fact many company more considered the foreign employees.Because they think human foreign more competent compared to indonesia people.
    My expectations english language in university more better and this education more to increasing.And english in university be the best program study and has high standart.However,I hope the tools advocate more to enhancing.In addition there are lecturer coming to foreign country and using english language in they country like as Australia,England,USA,and other country.With that the students can to see how to speak up like they.

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  80. NAME : NOVIA SUKRI
    NPM : 14040122 / D
    TITLE : THE IMPORTANT OF EDUCATION AND LEARNING ENGLISH LANGUAGE
    English education is language taht often using to communication with people from another country. In this time english language very important for our education. Moreover, in each country english language already obligated to education.
    With using english language we can do many things. For intance, the company in indonesian can work with the company from another country. Besides can work with another company, english language education has field at work that wide compared another subject. Of covise teacher is the first chance to work. Teacher that is subject that have many quality needed in elementary school, junior high school, and senior high school moreover in kindergarter already start learn english language.
    To knowing english language wide we can learn everywhere. English language have chance to get schoolarship in abroad for college student and student in high school who has achievement.
    I hope education of english language in indonesia have to always increase for people in indonesia can speak international language to introduce indonesia’s wealth and culture.
    Therefore, english language is international language in the world and create many things that give advantage for people in this world.

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  81. NAME : SELVI NOFIRA
    NPM : 14040136 / D
    TITLE : THE IMPORTANT OF LEARNING ENGLISH LANGUAGE
    Means of the important english education that is language is communication device that very important. The one of language that very important in this world is english language. English being one of language that use by people as formal language it is important, because with english language interaction process will happen. And communication between countries, every country can change the important information for us. For us, education of english is very needed.
    Learning english language is important because it is not harm us because english language being language that use of every people if live in abroad. Learning english for us as college student is important too, we can interaction with native with using english language. A part of people maybe think that learning english is very hard or difficult. But that english language need we lear ned because in this time, every people often using english language as official language. Education english is not make us hard too, but learning english will make us easy to interaction with native.
    English education and learning english that will help us in any work. For instance, we as indonesian people can be a guide for people from other country, because we can speaking english in good. Learning english need to we increase and always we develop. Learning english is very important us.
    With command in learning english, someone can communication more far, so our perception in information and technology will more opened. And have skill to communication with using english education is one of the big asset for step in world and technology progress that always gi forward. Therefore, we have to learn english language, because learninng english is important.
    Our expectation for our university, learning english language and education of english be one of many subject that most famous and the most primary because for every people english language is important to learned.

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    • i am not really sure that every people aboard use English for their daily life just like Japan and Franch they usually use their own language.🙂 (second paragraph)

  82. Name : Yulia Eka Putri
    NPm : 14040124
    Essay title : Condition Education And Learning English In Indonesia

    Aducation and learning english is a bridge that bring our to modern future. Because english is internasional leanguage and important for indonesion young generation. All country must apply education and learning english for one of important lesson in their school.
    Writer feel learning english in indonesia not satisfied enough. The mater happend because indonesian knowledge about english still shallow and regard english leanguage as leanguage. People feel leanguge is a crazy leanguage because it have different writen, differend read and different meaning. In contras with another country, english leanguage has been real leanguage because they did use english for each day leanguge.
    What is point of view learning english? First, student can do communication does not only indonesian society but they are can use commumication with British society or American society. For instance, a student that folllow competition in Netherland, he must can speaking english so that easy understanding to the audience. In this mater our must perfome the real what our have.so that another country not consider indonesian generation can speak and understand english.
    The second point of view learning english is improve motivation learning of students because they are certain if their have communicating in english thus they will be easy compete in the future. We know, in the future many company will recruit person has skill about english. This mater can do students with practice, practice and practice. For example, when students do activity he must english likes: playing football, cooking, study.
    My expectation for education and learning english is can used from all proffesion and all of indonesian can speak up with english without to to lost mother leanguage and indonesia will be better from before.

  83. Name : Salmi Wahyuli sri Devi
    NPM : 14040118 / 2014 D
    Essay Title : The importance of education and learning english for us

    Education is very important for us. Not only for us, but all of us need education. Why ? because with education we can known about history, culture, and we can get many knowledge. We can learning English in the university. In there we can more known about English. For example, we know about grammar, tenses, and how to have pronounciation better. And learning English also important to learn. Because with English we can easy to communicate with other people especially with tourist. And also we will be easy to go everywhere because we already understand their language or foreign language. The important of education and learning English it means :
    Firstly, with education we can reach all of dreams that we want. If we really want to be success we must have many knowledge. To having knowledge we must educated and learning English. When we already understand about English we will easy to ask for job and will being easy to go everywhere.
    Secondly, we can known what we do not know before. We can learn, learn and learn so that we can known more and get what we want. It’s all because we have education and understand about English.
    Thirdly, with education and learning English we can seek opportunity to the future. For example, we can seek opportunity to ask a job, not only in Indonesia, but we can also seek in the other country. Because we already understand and have experience about English and with education we already have many knowledge. Therefore, we will not doubt about rhat. Eventhough we are not be accepted but we already to endeavor to reach it.
    In conclusion, education and learning English are the important thing that we must mastered. Because with it we can changes everything that previous we can not to do and not know.

  84. NAME : EFRI MAIYUNI
    NPM : 14040138 / D
    TITLE : The important of education and learning english languange
    We know that english language already avowed as international languange for business, sport, academic and knowledge. Education of english languange can help us to more understand and comprehend about english languange, because english languange is international languange that many people in the world use english languange. That is the reason why english languange be the most general to use and very popular.
    English education already learned since elementary school, because english is important to our education. We learn english languange from elementary school until college we still learn it ever though we college not in english department but we still learn english.
    With learning english languange, our concept be more wide. for example, tourist that speak with their friends. We hear and we understand what they said. And it we can speak english we can speak with that tourist. We can ask about their life, about their life, about their culture and about the new knowledge. That is the reason why learn english is need to learn.
    English is international languange, moreover in national examination is obligated to english education. Can speak in english can facilitate us to looking for a job. For example, a job in bank, in office and in hotel. Generally, the job like that very supported of english languange. Increasingly, we can speak english, increasingly our knowledge about world.
    English languange is one of languange that very important in the world. Because english languange that use in anothers countries. My expectation in education english better to do in routine, because education of english languange not only formal education but also to informal. We also can follow course english languange.

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  85. Name : Izel Sapitri
    NPM : 14040126
    Essay title : Importance of Education and Learning English

    In era globalization, english to be role playing that importante for the people in comunication or having sociazilation. English have many role playing another such us progression of techonology, business, commerce, medicine, and industry. actually english can be important depend on person that to learn. A moment someone can to apply knowledge about english therefore english to be useful, In contrast, the individual only have wisdom of english however they are not to use that caused by many reason then learn of english will futile. Basically english will exceedingly to be influental in future time, especially MEA (Masyarakat Enokomi Asean), at the time the peole have skill in english will being lucky, because job opening require the reason have ability in english. You have to know many person study thoroughly of english nevertheless they have many reason to apply; such us, shy speech english bacause afraid ridiculet.
    Important of english in job opening. Because when some people have skill about of english then they can make job opening indenpendent, this mater will decrease unemploiment in indonesia. For illustrarion, there are five person than to repeatedly look for job opening, on the other hand, only one person needed company mentioned, thus four person another will be unemployment. If four person previously have skill in english then they can make same course of study and to recruit their friend for cooperation. If cooperation mentioned quit develop thus will unemploiment that have a job. Altough they do not have skill in english but they can be claning service, operator and teller in the office.
    Important of english in education. Initially english in scooling only to lear for four class in elementary school and futhermore; however, at now english learned in students, star from student going elementary school and afterward. In education english have role for student is give they knowledge about international leanguage. This mater will to improve mute of student to appear of future; such us, if student have skill about english then they are able to comprete in their life. Another example is student have apportunity to study go international futhermore their will easy communicating and fast having socialization with around environment.
    Important of english in social. Reason english to be influental in social is when somebody have knowledge about english therefore somepeople will be respec for their. Because human being consider their have educated. In circle of teeneger slanting to choose a friend that have many knowledge or smart. Next the person have skill comunicating in english have active use in process learning in class therefore she will have many friend because her friend estimate she smart.
    All in all, english can be important when the person able to apply knowledge about english. English impertant in job opening, in education and social. If individual have skill comicationg in english then she will have a chance in her life for develop. Many positive mater ggfrom english that can we learn, one of all, english is international language.

    • it is better for the writer to mention the example of English have many role playing another such us progression of techonology, business, commerce, medicine, and industry. (the firstparagraph) to support your arguments🙂

  86. NAME : FAUZIAH
    NPM : 14040110 / 14D
    Essay Title : Education And Learning English

    English language is International language in this time. In Indonesia, many high school use English language as introduction language in teaching activity. It show that english language is important for student to learn. Moreover, kids can use english because they often playing game online that use english language as they instruction. And this can make kids familiar with english language.

    In my opinion, education and learning english is important for our future. Because in the future we need to understand about english to help us to enter the global era. Especially in business. For example, if we looking for a job, english can increase our value and appreciated on the world of work international. And if we want to continue our education in abroad. Of course we need to use english language to communication.

    As a prospective teacher also important to be able with english as one of subject in college. Particularly if we major in english education. We have to command about english language because we will teach it to our students. It also can help to develop our ability in english with share the knowledge to our students later.

    In the era of globalisation , it is expected to increase the place to english course. In college, we can make club or english association to support our activity that related to english. And increasingly provided books, magazines, or newspapers related to english. Or apply the habit of talking in english language in college even though little by little. It will make the college student familiar to talk english and make them not shy to speak english anymore.

    Finally, education and learning english for me means to prove our skill in speaking in other language, not only in our mother language. As a college student of course we need to be able to talk with english language as supporting or as our asset to get into global world of work. And as a prospective teacher it is our responsibility to share our skill with next generation. English language is important to learned for all generation.

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  87. Name : Yulia Eka Putri
    NPm : 14040124
    Condition Education And Learning English In Indonesia

    Aducation and learning english is a bridge that bring our to modern future. Because english is internasional leanguage and important for indonesion young generation. All country must apply education and learning english for one of important lesson in their school.
    Writer feel learning english in indonesia not satisfied enough. The mater happend because indonesian knowledge about english still shallow and regard english leanguage as leanguage. People feel leanguge is a crazy leanguage because it have different writen, differend read and different meaning. In contras with another country, english leanguage has been real leanguage because they did use english for each day leanguge.
    What is point of view learning english? First, student can do communication does not only indonesian society but they are can use commumication with British society or American society. For instance, a student that folllow competition in Netherland, he must can speaking english so that easy understanding to the audience. In this mater our must perfome the real what our have.so that another country not consider indonesian generation can speak and understand english.
    The second point of view learning english is improve motivation learning of students because they are certain if their have communicating in english thus they will be easy compete in the future. We know, in the future many company will recruit person has skill about english. This mater can do students with practice, practice and practice. For example, when students do activity he must english likes: playing football, cooking, study.
    My expectation for education and learning english is can used from all proffesion and all of indonesian can speak up with english without to to lost mother leanguage and indonesia will be better from before.

  88. NAMA : ANISA PUTRI
    NPM : 14040108
    TITLE : Important Of English Language

    Globatisation give the positive impact in Indonesia. Many schools in Indonesia that use english language. Although, english language is the seond language in Indonesia, it is not substract the curious of children in Indonesia. Like many course places that always full with new children every year. In this time, english language in Indonesia already obligated. For example, english language examination in all degree of school in Indonesia.
    And many people in Indonesia, think that english language not over important. Because english language is difficult to understand. And difficult to pronoun it. For example, articulation english language that can change meaning if we wrong to pronoun it.
    I hope that english language can get good receive in Indonesia. Therefore, Indonesian people can compete wth another country. And i also hope english can get good support. Like, teacher who create the creativity that interested. So that make student feel easy in teaching process. Besides, my expectation is can get support from goverment, for instance, english village that obligated their people use english language. This will helpful the Indonesian people to know about english more deeply.
    Because english language have many advantage for indonesian people. With english language, it can help indonesia people in looking for a job in another country. Moreover, will connected between many countries. For example, Indonesin will make global market. In global market, we will use english language.
    Finally, globalisation will give benefit to Indonesia. Until, no more people consider that english language is not important anymore. Amd i hope, people can receive english language with agreeable.

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  89. NAME : FAUZIAH
    NPM : 14040110
    Essay Title : Education And Learning English

    English language is International language in this time. In Indonesia, many high school use English language as introduction language in teaching activity. It show that english language is important for student to learn. Moreover, kids can use english because they often playing game online that use english language as they instruction. And this can make kids familiar with english language.

    In my opinion, education and learning english is important for our future. Because in the future we need to understand about english to help us to enter the global era. Especially in business. For example, if we looking for a job, english can increase our value and appreciated on the world of work international. And if we want to continue our education in abroad. Of course we need to use english language to communication.

    As a prospective teacher also important to be able with english as one of subject in college. Particularly if we major in english education. We have to command about english language because we will teach it to our students. It also can help to develop our ability in english with share the knowledge to our students later.

    In the era of globalisation , it is expected to increase the place to english course. In college, we can make club or english association to support our activity that related to english. And increasingly provided books, magazines, or newspapers related to english. Or apply the habit of talking in english language in college even though little by little. It will make the college student familiar to talk english and make them not shy to speak english anymore.

    Finally, education and learning english for me means to prove our skill in speaking in other language, not only in our mother language. As a college student of course we need to be able to talk with english language as supporting or as our asset to get into global world of work. And as a prospective teacher it is our responsibility to share our skill with next generation. English language is important to learned for all generation.

    Words count : 363

  90. Name : MELYSA WULANDARI
    NIM : 14040119

    Essay title : Education and English language for me

    Education for me is something precious and very impotant to my life. I cannot separate it from my life because I need that. Education has many benefits for me and common people. With education, I can get what I want. Education can help me to know more about something or knowledge. Education may help people to do anything.
    In general, education not just learning about the objek matterial, but also educate my mannerism. With education I can know what the bad thing and a good thing. I also can do a good interaction with other people. Because education can teach me about how to socialization with my friends, or other people. If I don’t have education, it will make my life get a disordered.
    Learning English is one of many kind educations in my life. English language is a window of the world. And English is a part of my life. Everywhere, everycountry where I go, I can use English as my language. It will help me to communication with other people in that state. I can adding friends and be a close friend if I want with speak English. English is not just a common education, but it can help you to find a good job. I know that learning English is not easy. But I realize that if I like English I can pass the challenge.
    My expectations toward English learning in university is to make me be better and have a well skill with English. I mean, I can speak English so fluent and well. Because people these day use English in their daily life. Everywhere you go, English is important. I’am so happy if when I studying in university I can be better and expert to speak in English. And I want to honing my ability in English, speaking and writing English. And with studying English in university I wish I can find a good job.
    Overall, education is something you need in your life. You cannot avoiding it. Because education will help people to do something. One of all educations is learning about English language. English is an international language. If I or you can speak English very well, it can help you to get a job and socialitation with other people in other country. With education and learning English, I or you can easy to looking for a great occupation.

    • it is better for you to mention what kind of great occupation that you have talked about at your each paragraph to support the content your essay. but it was a great writing🙂

  91. NAME : FAUZIAH PERMATA SARI
    NIM : 14040123

    LEARNING ENGLISH MAKE GREAT FUTURE
    English language is world languages, with this language we can communication with other people that different country with us, for example if you visit other country such as India you can use this language for communication with that India’s people.
    The benefit learning English is can make student know about something that they do not know one of benefit of learning English is in can make easy in apply for job and increase of value in your job
    Language skills it be needed for some student beside in education language skills be needed for use your laptop, handphone , gadget, because in your phone or gadget is used by English language.
    I hope with learning English in university student can understand, and steeped their knowledge of English language, and with learning English can advance our country.
    Concluding, with English language we can communication with other people in different country of learning English is in can make easy in looking for job and make we easy for use our communication tool.

    • it is better for you to add (s) on your tittle just like Learning English make(s) Great Future. Then for your first argument that had been writtent above “English language is world languages” but i believe that english is just one of them. thank you🙂

  92. English learning very interest to me because when and where we go are used english language as communite between one people with another people.BEside ,english learning make we smart and modren style ,with english learning we easy to get something working,friends with another country and get job then create place create place working place anywhere.cause english language is international language in dealy life.
    If we going to another country we can get working with easyly ,get new friends,and more can practice about english language ,with thas this language easily to get many, because this moment many is everything many is friendly, many is life them many is happily.
    English important subject .This subject add me experience,and make relationship with another country in various busines working and jobs.
    My hopes as expectation toward english learning are ,star from now,i want to study hard ,achieve ability in language ,to more comperehend about something or contant about learning english ,until later i will profesional the school,improve their language especially english learning all of the people can working where she or he wants ,such as all the conpanies,bank ,at hotel ,translater,teachers,courses,and sources get much many to fill of the life in this world.

  93. NAMA : ANISA PUTRI
    NPM : 14040108 (2014D)
    TITLE : Important Of English Language

    Globatisation give the positive impact in Indonesia. Many schools in Indonesia that use english language. Although, english language is the seond language in Indonesia, it is not substract the curious of children in Indonesia. Like many course places that always full with new children every year. In this time, english language in Indonesia already obligated. For example, english language examination in all degree of school in Indonesia.
    And many people in Indonesia, think that english language not over important. Because english language is difficult to understand. And difficult to pronoun it. For example, articulation english language that can change meaning if we wrong to pronoun it.
        I hope that english language can get good receive in Indonesia. Therefore, Indonesian people can compete wth another country. And i also hope english can get good support. Like, teacher who create the creativity that interested. So that make student feel easy in teaching process. Besides, my expectation is can get support from goverment, for instance, english village that obligated their people use english language. This will helpful the Indonesian people to know about english more deeply.
    Because english language have many advantage for indonesian people. With english language, it can help indonesia people in looking for a job in another country. Moreover, will connected between many countries. For example, Indonesin will make global market. In global market, we will use english language.
    Finally, globalisation will give benefit to Indonesia. Until, no more people consider that english language is not important anymore. Amd i hope, people can receive english language with agreeable.

    Words count : 274

  94. NAME : NOVIA SUKRI
    NPM : 14040122 / D
    TITLE : THE IMPORTANT OF EDUCATION AND LEARNING ENGLISH LANGUAGE
        English education is language taht often using to communication with people from another country. In this time english language very important for our education. Moreover, in each country english language already obligated to education.
        With using english language we can do many things. For intance, the company in indonesian can work with the company from another country. Besides can work with another company, english language education has field at work that wide compared another subject. Of covise teacher is the first chance to work. Teacher that is subject that have many quality needed in elementary school, junior high school, and senior high school moreover in kindergarter already start learn english language.
        To knowing english language wide we can learn everywhere. English language have chance to get schoolarship in abroad for college student and student in high school who has achievement.
        I hope education of english language in indonesia have to always increase for people in indonesia can speak international language to introduce indonesia’s wealth and culture.
        Therefore, english language is international language in the world and create many things that give advantage for people in this world.

    Words Count : 210

  95. NAME : SELVI NOFIRA
    NPM : 14040136 / D
    TITLE : THE IMPORTANT OF LEARNING ENGLISH LANGUAGE
        Means of the important english education that is language is communication device that very important. The one of language that very important in this world is english language. English being one of language that use by people as formal language it is important, because with english language interaction process will happen. And communication between countries, every country can change the important information for us. For us, education of english is very needed.
        Learning english language is important because it is not harm us because english language being language that use of every people if live in abroad. Learning english for us as college student is important too, we can interaction with native with using english language. A part of people maybe think that learning english is very hard or difficult. But that english language need we lear ned because in this time, every people often using english language as official language. Education english is not make us hard too, but learning english will make us easy to interaction with native.
        English education and learning english that will help us in any work. For instance, we as indonesian people can be a guide for people from other country, because we can speaking english in good. Learning english need to we increase and always we develop. Learning english is very important us.
        With command in learning english, someone can communication more far, so our perception in information and technology will more opened. And have skill to communication with using english education is one of the big asset for step in world and technology progress that always gi forward. Therefore, we have to learn english language, because learninng english is important.
        Our expectation for our university, learning english language and education of english be one of many subject that most famous and the most primary because for every people english language is important to learned.
        
        Words Count : 333

    • the first sentence in pargaph one is so complicated. i’am not really understand what you mean. you can make it simple, like “English is very important as a device to communication”. but it was a good essay.

  96. NAME : EFRI MAIYUNI
    NPM : 14040138 / D
    TITLE : The important of education and learning english languange
        We know that english language already avowed as international languange for business, sport, academic and knowledge. Education of english languange can help us to more understand and comprehend about english languange, because english languange is international languange that many people in the world use english languange. That is the reason why english languange be the most general to use and very popular.
        English education already learned since elementary school, because english is important to our education. We learn english languange from elementary school until college we still learn it ever though we college not in english department but we still learn english.
        With learning english languange, our concept be more wide. for example, tourist that speak with their friends. We hear and we understand what they said. And it we can speak english we can speak with that tourist. We can ask about their life, about their life, about their culture and about the new knowledge. That is the reason why learn english is need to learn.
        English is international languange, moreover in national examination is obligated to english education. Can speak in english can facilitate us to looking for a job. For example, a job in bank, in office and in hotel. Generally, the job like that very supported of english languange. Increasingly, we can speak english, increasingly our knowledge about world.
        English languange is one of languange that very important in the world. Because english languange that use in anothers countries. My expectation in education english better to do in routine, because education of english languange not only formal education but also to informal. We also can follow course english languange.
        
        Words Count : 296

    • Efri, it is interesting to read your writing. You wrote a five-paragraphs essay. However, what you need to add is the details for each of your paragraphs. The introduction seems to have unclear thesis statement. The conclusion is also unclear. In spite of that, the essay could stand a better score if you add more details and examples – Mr. Syayid

  97. Nama :Indah Lestari
    NPM :14040116 (2014D)
    TITLE : The Important Of Learning English Language
        Learning English mean learn foreign language.Learning English very important because english language is internasional language.The mean study english language for me is how to has good pronounciation when using english because in english language wrong pronounciation will wrong mean.How to write in grammatical also be good speaker and listener.
         Learning English language very important.In Globalisation era english language very needed.However,will there are human from foreign country.In work areas english language very need also be prerequirement to enter a company.If we have good english language ,sure we will easy to find a job that we want.On the other hand if we can not to use english language we will difficult to find a job because get reputed not competent.For example a employees has good english language will more competent and get good position.Moreover a employees can not using english language will get job like as cleaning service and other low position.
        In education english language we will learning how to using the correct english language.Learning english must started from our heart and self.Otherwise we will difficult to understanding about it,and must seriously in studying english language.Our skill to increase vocabulary will make easy to speak up in english.The key of be good speaker in english is must often practiced.And habit of using english language in daily activity.
        Learning english language is education my choose.I choosing it because Iwant to increase my skill in foreign language.However,if we have good skill in english we will easy to communication with human foreign and will easy to get a job.Further more company in indonesia more believe at skill human foreign.In fact many company more considered the foreign employees.Because they think human foreign more competent compared to indonesia people.
        My expectations english language in university more better and this education more to increasing.And english in university be the best program study and has high standart.However,I hope the tools advocate more to enhancing.In addition there are lecturer coming to foreign country and using english language in they country like as Australia,England,USA,and other country.With that the students can to see how to speak up like they.

    Words count : 356

    • Your essay, Indah, is interesting. You have something to say about the important of learning English language. You need to pay attention to the use of capital letters, especially for the word, english. It should be “English”. For each paragraphs, you need to add more emphasis on the use of transition signals, so your paragraphs can have unity and coherence. Beyond that, I am glad to know that you already define the important of learning English at your time today – Mr. Syayid

  98. NAMA : ANISA PUTRI
    NPM : 14040108 (2014D)
    TITLE : Important Of English Language

    Globatisation give the positive impact in Indonesia. Many schools in Indonesia that use english language. Although, english language is the seond language in Indonesia, it is not substract the curious of children in Indonesia. Like many course places that always full with new children every year. In this time, english language in Indonesia already obligated. For example, english language examination in all degree of school in Indonesia.
    And many people in Indonesia, think that english language not over important. Because english language is difficult to understand. And difficult to pronoun it. For example, articulation english language that can change meaning if we wrong to pronoun it.
    I hope that english language can get good receive in Indonesia. Therefore, Indonesian people can compete wth another country. And i also hope english can get good support. Like, teacher who create the creativity that interested. So that make student feel easy in teaching process. Besides, my expectation is can get support from goverment, for instance, english village that obligated their people use english language. This will helpful the Indonesian people to know about english more deeply.
    Because english language have many advantage for indonesian people. With english language, it can help indonesia people in looking for a job in another country. Moreover, will connected between many countries. For example, Indonesin will make global market. In global market, we will use english language.
    Finally, globalisation will give benefit to Indonesia. Until, no more people consider that english language is not important anymore. Amd i hope, people can receive english language with agreeable.

    Words count : 274

    • Anisa, your essay has clear ideas on the importance of English language. The context is clearly expressed in Indonesia. The unity is there. Every paragraphs are connected by the use of connecting words, such as finally. However, to make your essay clearer, you could give more emphasize on the aspect of details. The more details you give, the better your essay will be. Keep writing! – Mr. Syayid

  99. NAME : FAUZIAH
    NPM : 14040110 (2014D)
    Essay Title : Education And Learning English

    English language is International language in this time. In Indonesia, many high school use English language as introduction language in teaching activity. It show that english language is important for student to learn. Moreover, kids can use english because they often playing game online that use english language as they instruction. And this can make kids familiar with english language.

    In my opinion, education and learning english is important for our future. Because in the future we need to understand about english to help us to enter the global era. Especially in business. For example, if we looking for a job, english can increase our value and appreciated on the world of work international. And if we want to continue our education in abroad. Of course we need to use english language to communication.

    As a prospective teacher also important to be able with english as one of subject in college. Particularly if we major in english education. We have to command about english language because we will teach it to our students. It also can help to develop our ability in english with share the knowledge to our students later.

    In the era of globalisation , it is expected to increase the place to english course. In college, we can make club or english association to support our activity that related to english. And increasingly provided books, magazines, or newspapers related to english. Or apply the habit of talking in english language in college even though little by little. It will make the college student familiar to talk english and make them not shy to speak english anymore.

    Finally, education and learning english for me means to prove our skill in speaking in other language, not only in our mother language. As a college student of course we need to be able to talk with english language as supporting or as our asset to get into global world of work. And as a prospective teacher it is our responsibility to share our skill with next generation. English language is important to learned for all generation.

    Words count : 363

    • “Fauziah, the way your write essay is communicative. It is clear. You have opinions on the essay. However, to strengthen your essay, you could add more details on each of the paragraphs. The second, third, and fourth paragraphs need more attention by providing them details, such as examples, statistics, or stories. Unity needs to be adjusted as well. Overall, the essay is fine. It just needs a little more improvement for coherence and cohesion” – Mr. Syayid

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